The Pitter-Patter of Rain

The Pitter-Patter of Rain 

I sit here on the porch listening, 
Watching the rain in the night.
Pitter-patter on my roof, 
I thought about all I have gained,
Over all these years of life,

As all I have lost and gone,
As if water washed it all away,
Oh maybe it was all the people, 
And the circumstance that did,
Never to be found, 
retrieved nor replaced again,

The only thing to mend my heart,
 To fill the emptiness within me,
Is Jesus as He had promised,
As the rain kept falling into the night, 
as tears from my heart for you,

 As I was comforted by the pitter-patter,
As the footsteps returning, 
faces to see again,
Words left unspoken, 
now are able to be said

In this life there is only once chance, 
To fully make it right,
-       Resolution and completion    - 
Only you know when it can happen,

A presence in life suddenly washed away, 
Only to return in dreams, 
When my eyes have shut….
To the  pitter-patter of rain, 
Falling in the night.

Rev. Dr. Samuel Mack
Copyright  2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/9/2017 10:54:00 AM
Hello Samuel, I also enjoy the sound of the pitter- patter of the rain.The sound of the rain hitting the roof is very relaxing sound. I have enjoyed your poem my friend.
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Rev. Dr. Samuel Mack Oms Dd
Date: 7/9/2017 1:04:00 PM
Thank you my friend as you have inspired these as I continue to write as they come I enjoy shearing them with you and all God's blessing always
Date: 6/13/2017 11:45:00 AM
Beautiful
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Date: 6/13/2017 5:04:00 PM
Thank you I know we all enjoy some good writes and I really like this one God's blesings always
Date: 6/13/2017 8:31:00 AM
I often sit on my porch and enjoy the sound of the rain on my tin roof. The mind does tend to wander. Your poem has a certain peace about it. Thank you for sharing:)
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Date: 6/13/2017 5:04:00 PM
Thank you I know we all enjoy some good writes and I really like this one God's blessings always
Date: 6/13/2017 7:39:00 AM
Very nice! This is well expressed. I also know what that pitter patter of the rain sounds like and the feeling that accompanies it.
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Date: 7/6/2017 8:37:00 AM
Thank you I know we all enjoy some good writes and I really like this one God's blessings always
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