The Pit of Sorrow

Out of the pit of sorrow she departs
Her breast it heaves with every tear
Down a dusty trail of broken hearts
When will a kindred soul appear

Her breast it heaves with every tear
Her heart again opens up her arms
When will a kindred soul appear
Her eyes betray just a glimmer of hope

Her heart again opens up her arms 
Down a dusty trail of broken hearts
Her eyes betray just a glimmer of hope
Out of the pit of sorrow she departs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 10:45 AM
I enjoyed very much, Roger! Glad you tried something new :)
Adams Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 3:43 PM
Thank you for the comment Kim. I'm glad you enjoyed it. 80} R
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