The Pit and Battle of Despair

I'm plunging into a pit of despair
The burden of despair I cannot bear
I see no light in this bottomless pit
Down I go, nearer to where darkness sits

I am tired of fighting this battle
The fight to live is just unbearable
I'm failing; I'm falling; I'm faltering
God knows I've tried to fight, but I'm losing

My knowledge of God feels unreal to me
I know He's good; His goodness I can't see
His love, grace and mercy I cannot find
For hopelessness engulfs my feeble mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 4, 2016 at 3:23 AM
Been there too, Joanne, but our God sometimes allows these trials in our lives, now we may never understand why, but surely "..we know that all things work together for good to them that love God, to them who are the called according to his purpose." Romans 8:28
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