The Pilgrimage of Remembrance

They foolishly spend time and money 
on the pilgrimages 
deeming that Father will fill their aprons
with precious pearls.

Basket of sins on their heads 
still overflows,
and a pious life
is rarely loved.

The 'sacred’ water of the Ganga 
merely washes
the decaying bodies 
of impure souls.

No relation with Him,
no connection with Him;
their pilgrimages go on
half the cycle.

What do they gain
by the journey of bodies
when the mind is left
in worldly worries?

His real children
living in the temple of body
reach Sweet Home
in the fraction of a second.

Their journey is 
the spiritual journey,
journey of the mind, 
the pilgrimage of remembrance.

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Date: 10/28/2018 12:39:00 PM
Sharp pen, my friend! … As the prophets tell us, God wants sincerity, repentance and real change to accompany our outward observances. Otherwise, the latter are empty. Nicely done, Jagdish. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 10/29/2018 2:19:00 AM
Thanks so much for your comment, Sir.
Date: 10/26/2018 11:44:00 AM
God wants us to remember Him by being soul-conscious, detached from the body.
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