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Those pigs were big black razor backs and it was either climb the tree or run. Pine trees don't have limbs so it wasn't easy but if I hadn't been able to go up that tree I was pig food. I was quite young and strong and very nimble and it was a do or die situation.

Once upon a time so very long ago, I took my dogs out for a run not far from home and so, I thought we would all be fine beneath the cooling shadows, Of the trees and bushes as we ran past fields and fallow. The forest was the place for us where we might see a deer, And mayhap chase some rabbits and splash through streams so clear. We loved the forest and the fields, loved resting in the shade, Of the Pine grove way out back where squirrels and wild things played. One day while we hunted there to see what we might find, We happened on a bunch of pigs, not tame, the wild kind. Big black tuskers that they were with humps and sloping heads. You can't chase them, they won't run, they'll chase you instead. Immediately the dogs gave chase and just as quickly scattered. I went straight up the nearest tree, escape was all that mattered. The dogs went home and gathered 'round the porch and Mama knew, Something was wrong and called the boys and they were worried too. The dogs went home without me, a sign something was up. They told them "Go find Judy!", the trail was soon picked up. The pigs had gathered 'round the tree where I hung and cried. I could hear Mom calling me, worried what betide, Her wandering girl out in those woods, she sent the boys to find me. Meanwhile the pigs got tired and left so I came down the Pine tree. My uncles laughed and laughed at me as they told the story, Of how they found me in the woods climbing down a Pine tree.

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Date: 3/19/2022 8:38:00 AM
A mad, bad pig tale, Judy. You're quite the storyteller. I enjoyed your poem and tale through poetry. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/28/2022 7:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Bill God Bless, JB
Date: 3/15/2022 6:02:00 AM
You are a good storyteller in poetic form. I have never encountered a wild hog, but tame ones can be defensive of their young or just themselves and their home territory. I am so glad you did not get hurt nor killed in that escapade. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
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Date: 3/28/2022 7:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara. God Bless, JB
Date: 2/28/2022 10:33:00 PM
Woww a fantastic story well told, chased up a limbless pine tree by wild pigs! Is this a true episode? Enjoyed the superb rhyming as well. Kudos! And glad you escaped without hurt. <<<<<<<>>>>>>>^^^^^^^>>>>><<<<<<<< Plz read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 3/13/2022 3:30:00 PM
Thank you s much Zaynab. Yes it's a true story. God Bless, JB
Date: 2/21/2022 9:50:00 PM
I'm glad you got up that tree, those wild pigs can be mean. My brother-in-law took their dog for a walk on their property. He didn't have his dog on a leash, it was on their own acreage, when Bosco saw a wild pig, he attempted to chase it, but it didn't run, it attacked! Many stitches and thousands of dollars later, Bosco is doing ok now. It's good you were smart and got up the tree, and that your dogs high tailed it for home and got you help! Smart dogs!
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Date: 3/13/2022 3:31:00 PM
Thank you so much B.J. I sure feel sorry for Bosco but he lucked out in that the pig didn't just tear him apart and eat him. God Bess, JB
Date: 2/2/2022 10:01:00 AM
I hear those wild pigs can be dangerous. I also hear we now have them in our province. Yikes a pine tree is not an easy tree to climb. Enjoyed the story. love phyl
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Date: 3/13/2022 3:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Phyl. No it isn't easy but when you are young, lithe and scared it gets easier. I was just a skinny little kid. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/28/2022 7:57:00 AM
The story was fantastic. When you first saw those wild pigs, I can image how terrified you were. This is a story that will go on through generations, as your grandchildren will tell it. Thanks for sharing . Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 3/13/2022 3:34:00 PM
Thanks so much Debra. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/26/2022 7:03:00 PM
I guess you're not one of those who 'pines for pigs,' are you?! lol Great story, Judy! Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 3/13/2022 3:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Gershon. I've had pet tame pigs but these were the wild razor backs in the woods. Dangerous animals. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/26/2022 2:59:00 PM
WoW! Judy, I really enjoyed your story from long ago. It sounds like it was scary. It’s good you were able to fine shelter in the tree. Well done. Have a nice day my friend-Alexis
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Date: 3/13/2022 3:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Alexis. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/26/2022 11:22:00 AM
HEY JUDE - Judy was so nimble and ran away quickly She climbed up a pine tree rather briskly Black tusked pigs were on her trail She wanted to live to tell her tale! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/13/2022 3:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Jennifer. Love the clever revue. You got that right. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/25/2022 6:29:00 PM
Hello Judy ... a fine story, well explained in rhyme. Feral pigs can be very dangerous animals indeed so I consider your judgement very wise indeed - thanks Judy - Lindsay
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Date: 3/13/2022 3:38:00 PM
Thanks so much Lindsay. I agree. Wild pigs are nothing to fool around with. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/25/2022 5:47:00 PM
A very well-crafted poem, Judy. When the first verse starts, the reader is attached to your flowing words. Thanks for sharing this great work.
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/13/2022 3:39:00 PM
Thank you s much my friend. God Bless, JB

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