The Picture On the Coin

You can take love
to the store~ that's nice,
but the cashier will say
kindly, that I need a bit
more...

You can take love to the bank,
and the teller will say, that's nice
but not a deposit, dear, to be
quite frank...

One takes love to the Altar:
I also do, but two years latter
the relationship may be thoroughly
through...

for in the scheme of physical reality
love is not coin even accepted by
charity, as the plate is passed
from hand to hand down the pew
if not delivered your 10%
the priest may think, damn you! 

Yet, I confess, being addicted to love,
no great wealth on earth, small price to pay
for tokens fitting the turnstile above....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Volumes Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 3:30 AM
Yup a camel definitely wont go through the eye of a needle.. and hate cant drive out hate, only love can do that ..... Your poem s beautiful Joe.
DiMino Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 5:19 AM
Thank you, Wen; absolutely, putting fire on fire only makes the flame taller and hotter. Blessings my friend.
Romios Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 2:09 AM
Very original, Prince! I love it, Pangie x x
DiMino Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 5:21 AM
Hi Pangie; thank you. All topics are not original...the only thing that makes a write original...is ourselves. Even the sin, a duplicate. Blessings my friend.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 9:41 AM
Unfortunately and with much to be desired, love is abstract.
DiMino Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 9:25 PM
Thank you, victor. Right in line with spirit and soul.
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