The Physics of Sunshine

The Physics of Sunshine

And I'm finding it hard to break through and tell you
About the physics of sunshine
And when it's all over we may find ourselves together singing out of tune
About the wishing wells and spells softly spoken in the dark

In an electric arc of promised carousel rides, candy thoughts, and whispers of coastlines
Explored and undone petals washed in rays of time and history
I'm finding it hard to explain to you
All that is misunderstood

The sunshine is warm and the particles they spin
In and out of existence
Oh, though I find myself lost within the entropic withering energy of now
Without the physics and the lyrics of sunshine cast
I could never lay these particles into you

I'm with you on this deserted but scarred terrain
Dancing with the theories of existence all entwined
In our glass of wine and our lips locked around the mirrors
Of today, colored with the existence of tomorrow

And I see you in my dreams
Often in the sunshine you are singing
Often in the darkness you are clinging to my t-shirt
And tugging at my heart through my jeans

Even in the sunshine I'm lost without you
And though gravity holds me here
The spin of our destiny still needs to be tied with string
My love inflated – bound within this universe 

My heart and fear are now time tested 
And now it is into the sunshine of another place parallel to our own
Whether in this dimension or the next one over
I'm tied to you fast forward or rewind
Our love will always be alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/13/2012 3:41:00 PM
What a beautifull poem, kept my attention the whole write and felt your feel of words spoken to your love, you have a gift, may your sunshine stay alive, love debra
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Date: 8/25/2012 6:15:00 AM
Landor, you write so beautiful in this poem - well done! - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/24/2012 10:29:00 AM
Beautifully written!!
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Date: 8/23/2012 11:20:00 PM
Welcome to this site. You are off to a good start with this fine first entry. It is very descriptive which makes it interesting to read.
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Date: 8/23/2012 5:32:00 PM
Such a sweet tender write. Very enjoyed. Michael
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Landor Angulo
Date: 8/23/2012 6:41:00 PM
Thank you, Michael. This poem is an accurate reflection of my thoughts on existence and love.
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