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The Phobosian

There once was a Martian from Phobos
When he spoke he was really verbose
He chattered away
Yes, day after day
Till, he drove the whole moon comatose!

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Andrea Dietrich

March 19, 2010 at 7:08 AM

Oh, I love this one, Deb. YOu do well with limericks and they are very metrical too! LUv,Andrea

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 15, 2010 at 2:21 PM

I like it, Deb.! BIG SMILES, Dane

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 15, 2010 at 5:15 AM

Oh, lol So that's why there is no longer a man in the moon. I so enjoyed watching him as a child! LOL Good one. Very cute idea. Soup mail... Smiles, Dane Ann

John Loving Iii

March 14, 2010 at 5:22 PM

how about "demi gods" but there is still one tree. john

Veronica Joseph

March 14, 2010 at 5:03 PM

an absolute example for teaching children.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 14, 2010 at 9:47 AM

SOUP MAIL....

Andrea Dietrich

March 13, 2010 at 6:33 PM

REALLY good one,Deb. Don't see you nearly enough any more, dear lady! LUv, Andrea

Christopher Flaherty

March 13, 2010 at 2:25 PM

Hello Deorah. This martians name wasnt Chris was it ? An idea came to me with you in mind , it is a work in progress that will never be concluded or could be done justice but you can add a line at will when you feel inspired ,Please read New York and weave your Magic . Cheers Chris

James Marshall Goff

March 13, 2010 at 8:24 AM

original, lighthearted, and much fun, Deb!,(got my new laptop!) and oh, I didn't return to the highway crash because first responders were close by and much better prepared to deal with the twisted devastation I discovered than I could have possibly been.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 13, 2010 at 4:54 AM

judge to stop laughing long enough.. have not had my brew yet Debbie... what can I say .. its only 7 am on a rainy Saturday here in New Jersey... luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 13, 2010 at 4:53 AM

Honestly I don't see how the judge will be able to stop long enough to judge with this funny Limerick ..honey... this is just too amazing and great words... rhyme is rockin' girl... am still working on The Twining.. feels more like The Shining to me but am not giving up... found a partner if he does not kill me first...luv ..Linda-Marie.. new blog if u care to post your John Hancock in print.. oh..I made a funny...luv..