The Phantom of Delusion

I am the floating pieces within the black hole of the verses
The dark phantom take a side emitted in remaining shadow
Who could stop me from my battle towards to the numbness?

One night the moon hid itself into an echo 
Those, the conceited tribal of the mystic valley compete me in a crime 
The dark phantom take a side emitted in remaining shadow

They hinted a race to steal the pendulum ore of a time
Missing clue about who the hell they were facing
Those, the conceited tribal of the mystic valley compete me in a crime 

I summoned my mainstay tools called the time machine
In all of the sublimity of my narcissism, I flew
Missing clue about who the hell they were facing

Pursuit the tail which left me to the situation which I knew
Sneaking through the darkness, I sprint to the vessel of a good shot
In all of the sublimity of my narcissism, I flew

In every ease of victory named as the beauty of the black spot
Sneaking through the darkness, I sprint to the vessel of a good shot
I am the floating pieces within the black hole of the verses
Who could stop me from my battle towards to the numbness?

Awake on gasp
Drool mapped on pillow
Did my husband aware?

(*scratching head with confusion) 

2nd place
Contest Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser 	
Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/12/2013 11:48:00 AM
Yanny, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/12/2013 6:04:00 PM
Thank you Skat! :D Your comment also wonderful Skat :)
Date: 1/12/2013 11:12:00 AM
Yanny congrats on your win, very good write...David
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/12/2013 5:37:00 PM
Thank you David, glad to have you here :D
Date: 1/12/2013 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Yanny luv xx
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/12/2013 3:52:00 AM
Thank you Mandy :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/12/2013 1:02:00 AM
Very well done Yanny! You brought the fantasy to life. Congrats on your win!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/12/2013 3:51:00 AM
Thanks Vicky :D -hug, yanny
Date: 1/11/2013 9:47:00 PM
Yanny.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser " contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/11/2013 9:49:00 PM
Thanks Linda, missing you here :) hopefully you will start your beautifully pen soon :D and i would gladly to read yours and enjoyed it :) - hug, yanny
Date: 1/11/2013 8:14:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you Yanny! I very much relate to your dreamstate here especially these days! ;) E=mc²
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/11/2013 8:34:00 PM
Thank you Edward, it is really a pleasure to have your support here as well :D
Date: 1/11/2013 7:45:00 PM
Quite a dream! Congrads on your win Light & Love
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/11/2013 8:34:00 PM
Thank you Debbie, glad to see you today :D
Date: 1/11/2013 6:55:00 PM
I loved this poem, you are so good Yanny! Congratulations.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/12/2013 12:26:00 AM
You met the challenge very nicely, you should be very proud of yourself. Good Morning Yanny.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/11/2013 8:32:00 PM
Thank you Rick, this is my first challenging contest too, I really enjoyed it very much in seeking the inspiration of this poem :D -hug, yanny
Date: 12/31/2012 6:08:00 AM
enjoyed reading this... good luck
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/1/2013 2:11:00 AM
Thanks Apoorva :D it's a pleasure to have a visit by you too :D
Date: 12/15/2012 8:30:00 AM
Yanny; This is a very good poem and I hope you win. Good luck. Lucilla
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/15/2012 10:26:00 AM
Thanks Luci, you always bring warmth in every pages of mine :D - Hug, Yanny
Date: 12/15/2012 1:22:00 AM
Oh, phantom of delusion and it had you scratching your head in the end with confusion!! (that was funny what you wrote). Anyway, I know the poem itself is not funny, but it shows me that you have a lot of imagination, Yanny!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/15/2012 1:29:00 AM
Thank you Andrea you bring me a smile today by giving an amusing cute comment :D, I'm glad that you enjoyed :D
Date: 12/14/2012 5:38:00 PM
Reads like a winner in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..I am okay..I will be busy for a few days with different things pertaining to the upcoming Christmas..Well probably about a week I will be busy..Sara
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/14/2012 6:15:00 PM
Well, I wish you to have a wonderful moment Sara :D, happy holidays and Merry Christmas :D
Date: 12/14/2012 6:16:00 AM
LOve the Imagery..Good luck for the win,. Mehnaz
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/14/2012 7:53:00 AM
Thanks Mehnaz, your support is really encouraging :D
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