The Phantom of Delusion

I am the floating pieces within the black hole of the verses
The dark phantom take a side emitted in remaining shadow
Who could stop me from my battle towards to the numbness?

One night the moon hid itself into an echo 
Those, the conceited tribal of the mystic valley compete me in a crime 
The dark phantom take a side emitted in remaining shadow

They hinted a race to steal the pendulum ore of a time
Missing clue about who the hell they were facing
Those, the conceited tribal of the mystic valley compete me in a crime 

I summoned my mainstay tools called the time machine
In all of the sublimity of my narcissism, I flew
Missing clue about who the hell they were facing

Pursuit the tail which left me to the situation which I knew
Sneaking through the darkness, I sprint to the vessel of a good shot
In all of the sublimity of my narcissism, I flew

In every ease of victory named as the beauty of the black spot
Sneaking through the darkness, I sprint to the vessel of a good shot
I am the floating pieces within the black hole of the verses
Who could stop me from my battle towards to the numbness?

Awake on gasp
Drool mapped on pillow
Did my husband aware?

(*scratching head with confusion) 

2nd place
Contest Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser 	
Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 12, 2013 at 11:48 AM
Yanny, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
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January 12, 2013 at 6:04 PM
Thank you Skat! :D Your comment also wonderful Skat :)
Williams Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 11:12 AM
Yanny congrats on your win, very good write...David
Widjanarko Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 5:37 PM
Thank you David, glad to have you here :D
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January 12, 2013 at 3:36 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Yanny luv xx
Widjanarko Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 3:52 AM
Thank you Mandy :D - hug, yanny
Tsiluma Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 1:02 AM
Very well done Yanny! You brought the fantasy to life. Congrats on your win!
Widjanarko Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 3:51 AM
Thanks Vicky :D -hug, yanny
A   Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Yanny.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser " contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD
Widjanarko Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 9:49 PM
Thanks Linda, missing you here :) hopefully you will start your beautifully pen soon :D and i would gladly to read yours and enjoyed it :) - hug, yanny
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January 11, 2013 at 8:14 PM
Congratulations and thank you Yanny! I very much relate to your dreamstate here especially these days! ;) E=mc²
Widjanarko Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 8:34 PM
Thank you Edward, it is really a pleasure to have your support here as well :D
Guzzi Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 7:45 PM
Quite a dream! Congrads on your win Light & Love
Widjanarko Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 8:34 PM
Thank you Debbie, glad to see you today :D
Lamoureux Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 6:55 PM
I loved this poem, you are so good Yanny! Congratulations.
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January 12, 2013 at 12:26 AM
You met the challenge very nicely, you should be very proud of yourself. Good Morning Yanny.
Widjanarko Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 8:32 PM
Thank you Rick, this is my first challenging contest too, I really enjoyed it very much in seeking the inspiration of this poem :D -hug, yanny
Patrikar Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 6:08 AM
enjoyed reading this... good luck
Widjanarko Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 2:11 AM
Thanks Apoorva :D it's a pleasure to have a visit by you too :D
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December 15, 2012 at 8:30 AM
Yanny; This is a very good poem and I hope you win. Good luck. Lucilla
Widjanarko Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 10:26 AM
Thanks Luci, you always bring warmth in every pages of mine :D - Hug, Yanny
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December 15, 2012 at 1:22 AM
Oh, phantom of delusion and it had you scratching your head in the end with confusion!! (that was funny what you wrote). Anyway, I know the poem itself is not funny, but it shows me that you have a lot of imagination, Yanny!
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December 15, 2012 at 1:29 AM
Thank you Andrea you bring me a smile today by giving an amusing cute comment :D, I'm glad that you enjoyed :D
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December 14, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Reads like a winner in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..I am okay..I will be busy for a few days with different things pertaining to the upcoming Christmas..Well probably about a week I will be busy..Sara
Widjanarko Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 6:15 PM
Well, I wish you to have a wonderful moment Sara :D, happy holidays and Merry Christmas :D
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December 14, 2012 at 6:16 AM
LOve the Imagery..Good luck for the win,. Mehnaz
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December 14, 2012 at 7:53 AM
Thanks Mehnaz, your support is really encouraging :D
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