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Poetry/Prose Poetry/The Person I Want To Be
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1657-652-17
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, September 17, 2024
For the International contest, 
The person I used to be-want to be
Sponsor, Silent One, Judged 10/12/2024

Second Place

Poem of the Day, September 18, 2024 

"I am my father's daughter and I am not afraid of anything." Quote by - Queen Elizabeth I
I want to be the person my father was, kind, forgiving, loving and faithful. He was a man who loved nature and taught me everything he knew about the forest, the foliage, wildflowers, birds and creatures, and of the seasons. I want to be that kind of person who loves nature and works to preserve it. My father loved quotes, had one for every situation. I love quotes too and realize now how fitting his quotes were. He took me on hikes, like wilderness vision quests. Up mountain trails to the top and we would camp under the stars, and follow streams. I want to be that kind of person too, who is not afraid to go into the unknown without fear to find myself, to be spiritual. My father had amazing ethics, was a good husband and father, and friend. His co-workers spoke highly of him. He was a hardworker, I want to be like that, he had goals, I have goals, he taught to me to leave things the right way, to never run away, but to turn away from a fight, a stronger person. He was not a writer, but loved listening to me read him my poetry, he was encouraging and a good listener, I think that I am too because of him. Father was quite a storyteller, well, I am too. I could listen to his stories forever, mother said only half of those stories were true, but I did not care. I took his death hard, like a part of me was missing, a forever wound, until I realized everything father had left me so I could grow into me.

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Date: 11/14/2024 8:22:00 AM
Beautiful poem and good tribute to your father. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 11/14/2024 1:51:00 PM
Kenisha, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, love Constance
Date: 11/11/2024 6:08:00 PM
Beautiful work, Constance. And, like you with your father, there isn't a day that goes by that I don't try to live up to the standard of goodness my father set. Cheers from Newfoundland. Jim
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Date: 11/12/2024 12:00:00 AM
Jim, from Newfoundland, thank you for the beautiful comment, and sharing about your father, we were so lucky to have such great fathers, some don't, Constance from Ottawa, Ontario
Date: 10/26/2024 12:36:00 AM
Such a beautiful tribute and poem. Well written.
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Date: 10/26/2024 8:24:00 AM
Daisy, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, love Constance
Date: 10/17/2024 9:16:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on another win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful/great tribute again. Glad this got a double win for you. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away.....................
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Date: 10/18/2024 7:32:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, this poem means a lot to me, I did not know it would until I wrote it, odd how that happens, and the song fits how I feel too, love Constance
Date: 10/12/2024 5:14:00 AM
A lovely thought dear Constance.. I hope you can be like your father.. Congratulations for your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/12/2024 10:55:00 PM
Silent, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and the comment, compliment and congratulations, your contests always bring out the poet in me, releasing my poetic voice and emotions, I love this poem so much, Constance
Date: 9/30/2024 9:52:00 AM
You touched my heart big time with your beautiful heartfelt loving tribute to your wonderful dad! Belated Congratulations Constance on POTD….so deserved! Debx
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Date: 9/30/2024 4:14:00 PM
Deb, thank you so much for the compliment, nice comment and congratulations on my PTD, appreciate, Constance
Date: 9/19/2024 12:08:00 AM
Lovely tribute Constance. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 9/21/2024 8:19:00 PM
Martin, thank you for the compliment and congratulations on my POTD, appreciate, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 8:07:00 PM
Hello, my friend, Constance! Congratulations, on your poem-making POTD. Because of my empathy and how rooted I am, this tribute to your father was so beautiful, that it became an imagery for me. I walked in the background shadows and somehow flashed of you and your father just like you wrote it, I envisioned you both standing there. Crafted eloquently, and tears of joy rolled down my cheeks. It's a fav for me and thank you for the inspiration. Have a Great Day! Warm Regards, William
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Date: 9/21/2024 8:20:00 PM
William, thank you for the compliment, and congratulations on my POTD, and for that lovely comment and the FAV, appreciate, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 6:47:00 PM
' I want to be the person my father was. ' Dear Constance, you are, in so many wonderful ways. I'm holding your thoughts so close to my heart. Your father is a part of you and he always will be. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/21/2024 8:21:00 PM
Brandy, thank you for the lovely compliment and comment, and for the congratulations on my POTD, hugs, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 6:18:00 PM
Great father and daughter! Both of you are great because of your amazing ethics. Very nice poem! Lovely read! Have a wonderful time sweet neat lovely Constance! Best regards & wishes ~AA
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Date: 9/21/2024 8:22:00 PM
Abdullah, thank you for the nice compliment, and comment, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 5:51:00 PM
A huge congratulations on POTD, Dear Constance. Your wonderful tribute to your father brought tears to my eyes. I do realize how close you were, and how important his legacy is to you!
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Date: 9/21/2024 8:23:00 PM
Mala, thank you for the congratulations on my POTD and for the compliment, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 2:00:00 PM
Constance, thank you for sharing this lovely tribute to your father. I remember the lovely ode to your mother, "I Love You Mom," that you wrote back in May. Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
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Date: 9/21/2024 8:24:00 PM
Mark, thank you for the compliment on both poems, the comment and congratultions on POTD, appreciate, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 1:04:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful/great tribute again. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 9/21/2024 8:24:00 PM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations on my POTD and for the compliment, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 12:14:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Congrats on your POTD. And thanks for sharing!
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Date: 9/21/2024 8:25:00 PM
Benjamin, thank you for the compliment and congrats on POTD, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 7:40:00 AM
You are a lovely person my friend. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 9/21/2024 8:26:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations on POTD, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 7:14:00 AM
Sorry for your loss Constance, Wonderful tribute to your father, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 9/21/2024 8:27:00 PM
Joseph, thank you for your compassion, compliment and congrats on POTD, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 6:01:00 AM
beautifully written Constance I can almost see him smiling in the shadows thinking "that's my girl"
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Date: 9/18/2024 6:08:00 AM
John, thank you so much for the wonderful comment, that is exactly what my father would say, appreciate, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 4:15:00 AM
Dear Constance, what a wonderful devotion to your father and legacy he has left behind. A wonderful and beautiful POTD! Congrats! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 9/18/2024 4:52:00 AM
Daniel, thank you so much for the compliment, and lovely comment, and the congrats on POTD, appreciate, blessings, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. This is a wonderful memory.
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Date: 9/18/2024 4:52:00 AM
Hilda, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratultions on POTD, appreciate, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 3:23:00 AM
A beautiful, honest, heartfelt tribute to your father, Constance. I really enjoyed reading every line of your poem. Warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 9/18/2024 4:53:00 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment, and lovely comment and the congratulations on POTD, appreciate, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 3:11:00 AM
Constance, a wonderful heart felt poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 9/18/2024 4:54:00 AM
Tania, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations on POTD, appreciate, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 1:45:00 AM
What a loving tribute I enjoyed reading! Your father’s loving ways created the great poet and person I can tell you are! Congratulations on potd and best wishes in the contest!
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Date: 9/18/2024 4:55:00 AM
Karen, thank you so much for the wonderful comment compliment, encouragement and congratulations on POTD, appreciate, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 12:49:00 AM
A loving father you had Constance, a beautiful tribute you’ve written in memory of him. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 9/18/2024 4:57:00 AM
Beryl, thank you for the wonderful comment, compliment and congratulations on poem of the day, appreciate, Constance
Date: 9/18/2024 12:31:00 AM
Lovely tribute Constance, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 9/18/2024 4:57:00 AM
Tom, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations on POTD, appreciate, Constance
Date: 9/17/2024 12:05:00 PM
WOW!!! What a write/great tribute. Love It... Sounds like you had a great father. I love your ending. I also miss mine more than words can say. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away.................
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Date: 9/18/2024 4:58:00 AM
Paula, thank you for the compliment, and comment , appreciate, Constance
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