The Perfume Bottle

The Perfume Bottle Poetry  Contest
Sponsored by: Craig Cornish  
Contest Judged:  9/25/2025 12:40:00 PM
( 13th Place )


On my dresser rests a bottle of glass
its angle still holding the light like water.
The stopper breathe when raised
and the air loads with her absence.

A breath of jasmine, faint but faithful,
returns me to the nights I waited
for the sound of her heels on the stair
her perfume arriving before her voice.

Now the bottle is nearly empty
yet one drop carries whole worlds:
laughter folded into nightfall rooms,
a touch that lingers longer than flesh.

Brittle as yesterday, constant as devotion
it reveals how a soul can remain
in the echo of fragrance alone
resting quietly where light cannot fade...
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 5:31 PM
beautifully soft words, lingering with the fragrance of your poetic voice. I enjoyed how this poem flowed. Best wishes with the contest
Velasco Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 6:12 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely words! I’m really glad the flow of the poem spoke to you.
Gondolf Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Nicely written, Rowena, it seems that our thoughts were the same on this prompt. Best of luck in the contest. John
Velasco Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 6:11 AM
Thank you so much, John! I really appreciate your kind words.
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