The Perfect Woman

The perfect woman is both lovely and charming
She carries herself with a sophisticated air of feminine grace
Gentle and loving and brimful with laughter,
Yet showing at times a stubborn streak of strength
Not always having the answers, yet knowing her values
She is both capable and vulnerable.
Perhaps too trusting, placing a limitless faith in God and man,
Thus endearing her to those who treasure it and rescue her from her distresses.
Possessing a boundless sense of honour and virtue
She cleaves to what is good and eschews evil.
She tends to be peaceable and tries to please others,
Esteeming others as greater than herself -- and being rightly esteemed in return.




-- Isaiah Zerbst --
-- Feb 8, 2013 --
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Richards Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:51 AM
This is a poem for all women to read, a goal to set our eyes upon. To honor a woman such as you have described would be a joy. Lovely poem to inspire all women
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 4:09 PM
Isaiah, a superb write! Seems you have the wisdom to recognize and honor a woman of such qualities. This is a beautiful tribute! I am not sure if I thanked you for my placement in your Irish contest but I sincerely thank you since my poem was a bit on the sad side, but I have found sadness and gladness walk hand and hand in Ireland and I just couldn't seem to make it funnier. After reading this poem, I am going to have to make you a favorite poet! Blessings, Lotus
Sefunmi Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 5:08 AM
Great! so my stubbornness is not a sin after all. This is a lovely poem Isaiah!
Ober Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 8:54 PM
Wow, the qualities you have described are all very admirable. I hope you have or will find this perfect woman! :) "Brimful with laughter" - love that!
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 11:20 AM
wow, I think you nailed it!! Good prose description, my friend.
Kendrick Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 9:01 AM
Aptly expressed..Enjoyed reading this morn..Must be a contest if so, reads like winning material..Thanks for the visit..Your stop is greatly appreciated..Sara
Chircop Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 8:39 AM
I d love to be that perfect woman MrI..To be as your poem describes Jolly..gentle loving..thinking the best of others..Being stubborn..that comes naturally to me i guess..lol;).Most of all id lovto be faithful to God.You described a woman so well.A perfect man would be a man who inderstands a woman s mind and that s not an easy taskB-).I read lots of your poetry cos i love it.Well done
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