The Perfect Poem : and the Truth Is

and the truth is, the truth is
there is no such thing as the perfect poem
syllable count and line and verse
the poet lays out his tools to show them
his best rhymes and worst to curse

and the truth is, the truth is
there is no subject worthy of best
no scan and sound better than all
a poem is a work of art not a test
the higher it gets, the further it can fall

and the truth is, the truth is
the feet stutter, the rhyme flattens
hours, days, weeks in the making
more words, more stanzas it fattens
the poet knows if the poem is faking

and the truth is, the truth is
the guard is up to be taken down
the poem expects to be picked clean
the poet bloodied, sporting a frown
poem obscure yet meaning to be seen

and the truth is, the truth is
before you with all due charity
if you see it that way, this way
words set out in an offer of clarity
today is this poems day

and the truth is, the truth is
the poem is
bang, flash, wallop, fizz
the poem is
bang, flash, wallop, fizz
the poem is
as perfect as
it is, is it, it is.

21.11.2010

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Date: 5/23/2025 6:06:00 PM
Hello Neil, the truth is, the truth is I don't believe there is a wrong poem. I invite u to visit my poetrysoup page and it's about Eternal God. U might want to read about my poem "Eternal" to know why I called God Eternal, u might want to comment on some of them informing me that u visited. I'm on friend builder link and your poem is one that I have to review. Ok so I hope u comment okay? Jac---> so that we have a Jac in girls and short for my real name bcoz my Jackie was a bad girl.
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