The Perfect Moment

I just had a moment 
When the window was open
I smelled the fresh air
It was a feeling I couldn’t bare

I was sitting on my bed
With my hands to my head
I began to cry 
You probably want to know why

The tears that role down my face 
The feeling of pain is not the case
The effects of my tears is Joy
What is the cause of this story?

Have you ever felt the moment when everything is right?
When your muscles aren’t tight
When you have the greatest friends
And the perfectly cool winds

When the perfects guy sweeps you off your feet
It’s like the perfect feeling of spring heat
No to cold and not to hot
The perfect moment is what I just caught
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 22, 2010 at 7:58 AM
I love this. It takes me back to the days when I was younger. Carry these perfect moments with you always. Make sure that as you get older you hang on to this feeling, and let it drive you. I love you sweetheart. Thank you for sharing this. Mom
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June 22, 2010 at 6:12 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Emily. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol
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June 21, 2010 at 8:08 PM
beautiful the way you describe your gripping moment of your perfect moment, sweet write..P.D.
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