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The Perfect Man

The perfect man is gentle Never cruel or mean He has a beautiful smile And keeps his face so clean. The perfect man likes children And will raise them by your side He will be a good husband to his bride the perfect man loves cooking, cleaning and vacuuming too. He'll do anything in his power to convey his feelings of love on you. The perfect man is sweet Writing poetry from your name He's a best friend to your mother and kisses away all your pain, never has he made you cry or hurt you in any way. Oh f**k this stupid poem The perfect man is GAY .. Lol #mk blaze#

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/14/2013 7:34:00 PM

Mushinge, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**

Mushinge Kabwe

Date: 9/2/2013 2:49:00 AM

Hello guys thank you very much for the love and support that i've received, am greatly appreciate it. Thank you once more

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2013 1:15:00 PM

Hi Mushinge, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *

Mushinge Kabwe
Date: 9/2/2013 2:52:00 AM

Hey thankx a lot my name is mushinge from Zambia. Am currently studying imis, am just a simple guy with. A huge mind so I always love to share what's on my mind.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/31/2013 4:01:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup, Mushinge ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Michael Coleman

Date: 8/31/2013 1:33:00 AM

Raw! More sprite like that and more truth you ll have all u need to succeed. awesome write welcome to the soup.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/30/2013 9:08:00 PM

lol...lol, yes they are.. why? O why?...love this for a first poem, Mushinge , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Mushinge Kabwe
Date: 9/2/2013 2:54:00 AM

thanks Linda