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The Perfect Love

Your love is perfect as can be, because you really satisfy me.  I love the
way you say my name, You make me feel like i am in the hall of fame.  Your
loving arms wrapped around my waist is such a sweet, caring embrace.

Your love is perfect as can be, especially when your face is touching mines,
it sends chills down my spine.  The way in which you touch my hand let me
know that you understand.  Your love is perfect as can be.

There is no other love out there for me, I love the way you talk to me. setting my
heart and soul free.  There can never be another love like you, who is perfect in
everything he do!  I dont not want to ever lose you.

Copyright © Shirley Long | Year Posted 2012

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Jeff Burris Date: 5/7/2012 11:03:00 PM Love the open warmth you express in your Poems. Login to Reply

Tamara Mears Date: 3/26/2012 7:01:00 PM Shirley, I really like this poem. It made me smile. Login to Reply

Corey Simmons Ii Date: 3/21/2012 8:01:00 PM This is a lovely read. I really enjoyed it! Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 2/23/2012 2:15:00 PM The Perfect Love, it's so lovely to desire this. Moving poem Shirley, thank you for sharing. Thank you also for your kind words on my poems :) Login to Reply

Amit Valmiki Date: 2/21/2012 11:17:00 PM well,great poem and no doubt it is like a beacon which puts a light on the person for whom you have written this poem, its really a great tribute for him...... Login to Reply

Marycile Beer Date: 2/12/2012 7:13:00 PM Shirley, your poem is the feeling I felt when I wrote my poem "Peace." As you say there will never be another love like the husband I spoke of in my poem. God Bless, Cile Login to Reply

Michael Poyntz Date: 2/11/2012 4:03:00 PM VERY SOFT AND GENTLE POEM. LOVED IT! Login to Reply

Cyndi Macmillan Date: 2/9/2012 10:05:00 PM Nice line breaks, Shirley, and a sweet poem. Hope you wrote this to give to someone! Hugs, Cyndi Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 2/3/2012 10:55:00 AM what luck Login to Reply

Maxeen Dennis Date: 2/2/2012 3:05:00 AM Love it! Login to Reply

Jim Pemberton Date: 2/2/2012 1:57:00 AM Thank you for your awesome words of encouragement and understanding! God bless you! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/1/2012 8:26:00 PM Shirley, nice ending words,,enjoyed stopping by tonight~ ;-) always,..pd. Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 2/1/2012 7:11:00 PM lovely rhyme! enjoyed the rich emotions you presented here Shirley. Thank you for stopping by and your kind comment. Login to Reply

George Aul Date: 2/1/2012 3:44:00 PM Very nice..........George Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 2/1/2012 3:07:00 PM Lots of love here, Shirley. Enjoyed mucho. daver Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 2/1/2012 8:57:00 AM Lovey poem enjoyed. Thanks for your comment on my write, loved,bl Login to Reply

Jenny Emelander Date: 2/1/2012 6:34:00 AM Beautiful!-Thanks for stopping by to read my poem!- Have a wonderful day! Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 2/1/2012 3:22:00 AM Rhyming is so strong, predictable, yet zany. Enjoyed the Perfect Love. ;) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2012 2:13:00 AM Lovely love poem written here Shirly. - oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 1/31/2012 9:41:00 PM the love it flows the rhymes do so, what more could i want here, johnsons gotta go, still thanking you, my dear.... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/31/2012 3:36:00 PM Passionate work..One lucky man who receives your love and lucky lady that is the receipent of his love..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for your kind review of my work..Sara Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/31/2012 2:24:00 PM lovely tribute to luv.. Shirley.. wonnderful rhyme.. luv is my fav subject.. it makes the world spin round..thankxx for reading my poetry luv.. Login to Reply