Shirley Long Poet Rhyme

The Perfect Love

Your love is perfect as can be, because you really satisfy me.  I love the
way you say my name, You make me feel like i am in the hall of fame.  Your
loving arms wrapped around my waist is such a sweet, caring embrace.

Your love is perfect as can be, especially when your face is touching mines,
it sends chills down my spine.  The way in which you touch my hand let me
know that you understand.  Your love is perfect as can be.

There is no other love out there for me, I love the way you talk to me. setting my
heart and soul free.  There can never be another love like you, who is perfect in
everything he do!  I dont not want to ever lose you.

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Jeff Burris May 7, 2012 at 11:03 PM Love the open warmth you express in your Poems.

Tamara Mears March 26, 2012 at 7:01 PM Shirley, I really like this poem. It made me smile.

Corey Simmons Ii March 21, 2012 at 8:01 PM This is a lovely read. I really enjoyed it!

James Fraser February 23, 2012 at 2:15 PM The Perfect Love, it's so lovely to desire this. Moving poem Shirley, thank you for sharing. Thank you also for your kind words on my poems :)

Amit Valmiki February 21, 2012 at 11:17 PM well,great poem and no doubt it is like a beacon which puts a light on the person for whom you have written this poem, its really a great tribute for him......

Marycile Beer February 12, 2012 at 7:13 PM Shirley, your poem is the feeling I felt when I wrote my poem "Peace." As you say there will never be another love like the husband I spoke of in my poem. God Bless, Cile

Michael Poyntz February 11, 2012 at 4:03 PM VERY SOFT AND GENTLE POEM. LOVED IT!

Cyndi Macmillan February 9, 2012 at 10:05 PM Nice line breaks, Shirley, and a sweet poem. Hope you wrote this to give to someone! Hugs, Cyndi

John Loving Iii February 3, 2012 at 10:55 AM what luck

Maxeen Dennis February 2, 2012 at 3:05 AM Love it!

Jim Pemberton February 2, 2012 at 1:57 AM Thank you for your awesome words of encouragement and understanding! God bless you!

Poet Destroyer A February 1, 2012 at 8:26 PM Shirley, nice ending words,,enjoyed stopping by tonight~ ;-) always,..pd.

M.I.A . February 1, 2012 at 7:11 PM lovely rhyme! enjoyed the rich emotions you presented here Shirley. Thank you for stopping by and your kind comment.

George Aul February 1, 2012 at 3:44 PM Very nice..........George

Daver Austin February 1, 2012 at 3:07 PM Lots of love here, Shirley. Enjoyed mucho. daver

Bl Devnath February 1, 2012 at 8:57 AM Lovey poem enjoyed. Thanks for your comment on my write, loved,bl

Jenny Emelander February 1, 2012 at 6:34 AM Beautiful!-Thanks for stopping by to read my poem!- Have a wonderful day!

Gwendolen Song February 1, 2012 at 3:22 AM Rhyming is so strong, predictable, yet zany. Enjoyed the Perfect Love. ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2012 at 2:13 AM Lovely love poem written here Shirly. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Don Johnson January 31, 2012 at 9:41 PM the love it flows the rhymes do so, what more could i want here, johnsons gotta go, still thanking you, my dear....

Sara Kendrick January 31, 2012 at 3:36 PM Passionate work..One lucky man who receives your love and lucky lady that is the receipent of his love..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for your kind review of my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 31, 2012 at 2:24 PM lovely tribute to luv.. Shirley.. wonnderful rhyme.. luv is my fav subject.. it makes the world spin round..thankxx for reading my poetry luv..