The Perfect Day

A hot cup of tea greeting me—
first thing in the morning, 
wife smiling unconditionally, xo!  
hot water on tap, tsh…
neighbour’s doggy popping in to play,
“yap..yap..”
adding to the warmth,
a nice, steaming breakfast,
finishing the punch line of a poem—for a contest
colleagues in the department patting me on my new shirt,
 boss on the phone, “good work, so and so!”
overhearing students chattering merrily—about my latest lecture
a brisk round of tick-tock table tennis,
back home for a sumptuous dinner
and chat with the family, “haha, cacka…packa.. he he”
dozing off while reading a book—zzz...
all these things do happen to me or anyone —
but not on the same day!

Actually, there may be water on tap—not hot
Or while petting, the neighbour’s puppy
pisses on your new shirt…etc!


It is after all my notion of a perfect day—a daydream!

***
Winner, Poetry Contest sponsored by Madison Demetros, December 5, 2017.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/7/2017 6:23:00 PM
Congratulations! Awesome write.
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Ram R. V.
Date: 12/7/2017 6:30:00 PM
Thank you, dear Rhoda. I have an ardent admirer in you:-)
Date: 12/6/2017 9:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Ram.
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Ram R. V.
Date: 12/6/2017 10:01:00 PM
Thank you, Line:-)
Date: 11/26/2017 5:49:00 AM
I like your perfect day.. You did this very well.
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Ram R. V.
Date: 11/26/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thank you, SO, for your spontaneous compliment. Immensely pleased.:-)
Date: 11/26/2017 5:49:00 AM
I love this Ram! A fave! I loved the first xo...then the reality check at the end!
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Ram R. V.
Date: 11/26/2017 8:41:00 AM
Thank you, Kim, for your close reading and compliment:-)
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