The Perfect Day

A hot cup of tea greeting me—
first thing in the morning, 
wife smiling unconditionally, xo!  
hot water on tap, tsh…
neighbour’s doggy popping in to play,
“yap..yap..”
adding to the warmth,
a nice, steaming breakfast,
finishing the punch line of a poem—for a contest
colleagues in the department patting me on my new shirt,
 boss on the phone, “good work, so and so!”
overhearing students chattering merrily—about my latest lecture
a brisk round of tick-tock table tennis,
back home for a sumptuous dinner
and chat with the family, “haha, cacka…packa.. he he”
dozing off while reading a book—zzz...
all these things do happen to me or anyone —
but not on the same day!

Actually, there may be water on tap—not hot
Or while petting, the neighbour’s puppy
pisses on your new shirt…etc!


It is after all my notion of a perfect day—a daydream!

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Winner, Poetry Contest sponsored by Madison Demetros, December 5, 2017.
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Tripp Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 6:23 PM
Congratulations! Awesome write.
R. V. Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 6:30 PM
Thank you, dear Rhoda. I have an ardent admirer in you:-)
Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 9:48 PM
Congrats on your win, Ram.
R. V. Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 10:01 PM
Thank you, Line:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 5:49 AM
I love this Ram! A fave! I loved the first xo...then the reality check at the end!
R. V. Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 8:41 AM
Thank you, Kim, for your close reading and compliment:-)
One Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 5:49 AM
I like your perfect day.. You did this very well.
R. V. Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Thank you, SO, for your spontaneous compliment. Immensely pleased.:-)
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