Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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The Perfect Date

The Perfect Date
Fly away with me to untraveled lands
I'll be leading you there, holding your hand
Seeing world wonders, no man’s ever seen
Ethereal scenes, only shown in dreams.

Striking sunsets to mesmerise our eyes
Spellbinding beauty of rapturous skies
Stars highlighting ground with silvery strands
To overtures from nature's concert grand.

Moon bright as a jewel newly polished
Backlight to stately trees of the forest
Alien encounters for us to meet
Joyful to show off their peaceful retreat.

Creatures humans never witnessed before
With the chance to ride on backs of centaurs 
Fruits to savour beyond expectation
The marvels of beguiling creation.

This could be romantic, the perfect date
Let's realise it afore it’s too late.
7th February 2021

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Jennifer Proxenos February 12, 2021 at 8:46 AM I love you line "Alien encounters for us to meet Joyful to show off their peaceful retreat' and then 'Creatures humans never witnessed before with the chance to ride on backs of centaurs' I just adore your vivid imagination. Beautiful write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Beryl Edmonds February 12, 2021 at 9:52 AM Dear friend, you’ve given such a lovely review for this poem, I’m truly humbled. Thank you so much Jennifer. Hugs and blessings to you too~ Belle

Rama Balasubramanian February 10, 2021 at 2:52 AM You took me on a journey to a wonderful, beautiful place. Suddenly felt so much beauty around, how much do we see and enjoy? Have a great day ahead friend. Take care Rama Beryl Edmonds February 10, 2021 at 3:03 AM Thank you Rama, how much do we see, good question, I certainly see more now than when I were younger and appreciate the many wonders and beauty of earths surroundings... Best wishes ~ Belle

Alexis Y. February 7, 2021 at 11:24 AM WoW! Belle, I found it to be romantic,alluring, magical and mesmerizing. Who could refuse such a date? It was just breathtaking! Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Beryl Edmonds February 10, 2021 at 3:00 AM Such a lovely review Alexis, thank you. Have a beautiful day. Belle :-)

Jan Allison February 7, 2021 at 9:56 AM what a beautiful romantic fantasy poem Belle:-) hugs Jan xx Beryl Edmonds February 7, 2021 at 4:55 PM Thank you for that Jan, appreciated. Hugs, Belle :-) xx

Robert Pettit February 7, 2021 at 8:57 AM Hello Belle. What a fanciful write you tell. I would like to join you to this place. Let's ride on Pegasus at a rapid pace! Beryl Edmonds February 7, 2021 at 4:53 PM Hello Robert, you’d be most welcome and to ride on Pegasus rapidly would be extraordinaire. Thank you ~ Belle

J. Summers February 7, 2021 at 8:52 AM I like this, so visually striking. John Beryl Edmonds February 7, 2021 at 4:45 PM So nice of you, thank you very much John ~ Belle

Victor Buhagiar February 7, 2021 at 8:27 AM What a joyous poem. Perfect. ~~ Beryl Edmonds February 7, 2021 at 4:44 PM Thank you so much Victor, very grateful ~~ Belle

Tom Cunningham February 7, 2021 at 8:17 AM Sounds like Shangri la Belle, a very romantic journey. Tom Beryl Edmonds February 7, 2021 at 4:43 PM An idyllic paradise, in our dreams - Thank you Tom ~ Belle