The Perfect Date

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The Perfect Date Fly away with me to untraveled lands I'll be leading you there, holding your hand Seeing world wonders, no man’s ever seen Ethereal scenes, only shown in dreams. Striking sunsets to mesmerise our eyes Spellbinding beauty of rapturous skies Stars highlighting ground with silvery strands To overtures from nature's concert grand. Moon bright as a jewel newly polished Backlight to stately trees of the forest Alien encounters for us to meet Joyful to show off their peaceful retreat. Creatures humans never witnessed before With the chance to ride on backs of centaurs Fruits to savour beyond expectation The marvels of beguiling creation. This could be romantic, the perfect date Let's realise it afore it’s too late. 7th February 2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/12/2021 8:46:00 AM

I love you line "Alien encounters for us to meet Joyful to show off their peaceful retreat' and then 'Creatures humans never witnessed before with the chance to ride on backs of centaurs' I just adore your vivid imagination. Beautiful write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/12/2021 9:52:00 AM

Dear friend, you’ve given such a lovely review for this poem, I’m truly humbled. Thank you so much Jennifer. Hugs and blessings to you too~ Belle

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 2/10/2021 2:52:00 AM

You took me on a journey to a wonderful, beautiful place. Suddenly felt so much beauty around, how much do we see and enjoy? Have a great day ahead friend. Take care Rama

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/10/2021 3:03:00 AM

Thank you Rama, how much do we see, good question, I certainly see more now than when I were younger and appreciate the many wonders and beauty of earths surroundings... Best wishes ~ Belle

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/7/2021 11:24:00 AM

WoW! Belle, I found it to be romantic,alluring, magical and mesmerizing. Who could refuse such a date? It was just breathtaking! Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/10/2021 3:00:00 AM

Such a lovely review Alexis, thank you. Have a beautiful day. Belle :-)