THE PERFECT CRIMSON

He’s a great painter,
hands skilled in light and shadow,
canvas after canvas bending to his will.
Landscapes, faces, still lifes
he’s captured them all,
each stroke praised, each color admired.
But this painting,
this one refuses to bend.
He needs the crimson pomegranate,
a shade that dances between ripeness and fire,
but every mixture of oil and pigment
falls flat, dull, lifeless.
He experiments, obsessively,
hours into nights,
days folding into each other.
Nothing achieves the hue he dreams.
Nothing breathes.
Then, in a sudden, terrible clarity,
he understands:
his perfect crimson pomegranate
requires human blood.
A chill spreads through him.
The formula whispers its demand.
Will he let obsession claim him?
Will he paint the color at the cost of life?
The canvas waits, unjudging,
but the choice…
the choice is his alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Agustin Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 4:37 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Daniels Avatar
January 3, 2026 at 3:22 PM
Wow ! Gift. Phenomenal poem depicting artistic obsession. Very well crafted. The ultimate question any artist can ask ; “ Will he paint the color at the cost of life?”. ThkU for sharing. Blessings for 2026 to Nigeria from South Africa. Long live the poets from Afrika ! Long live.
Aaron Avatar
January 4, 2026 at 6:24 AM
Blessings to you too. Thank you for reading.
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