The Pendulum Ends

My mangling of words
begins again,
I chain up syllables
and thrash them with punctuation,
             the pendulum sways.

Twisting them into
          emotion,
stitching them together
to offer to you,
             the pendulum swings.

Severed letters
pile on the bloody floor,
         keeping only
the oozing essence of the body
I lay them,
     quivering,
on the page,
             the pendulum slows.

They beg you to read them
                       (save them)
but they can expect
a lifetime of torture
   until I lay with
       my dark mistress
in my earthly bed.
             The pendulum ends.

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Date: 9/11/2017 1:55:00 PM
Another intensely honest piece. Again, you take the reader with you.
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Mark Matthews
Date: 9/11/2017 3:57:00 PM
Again thank you, it means alot that you took the time to go through some of my other poems, I'm in a kind of a dark place right now, if you couldn't tell lol, I will make an effort to go through some of your work soon
Date: 10/29/2008 9:50:00 AM
thank you for your kind words on bloodred, I love this poem too. you are very talented.
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Date: 10/26/2008 12:17:00 PM
Love it!!!! L!S@
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Date: 10/3/2008 12:54:00 PM
Yuch and I mean that in the best possible way! The sway of this piece is strong. Thank you and thank you for your wonderful comments.
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