The Pen Versus the Sword

The incorrect usage of tense
And phrases of total nonsense
Wipe out brain status
With more apparatus
Than the Department of Defense
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Nunez Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 2:27 AM
lol! Guilty here at times...though I catch myself just in time...hahaha. Wow...such wit! Hey...these are great lims! :-)
Beaufort Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Me too! Language can be a set of prickly bushes we have to run though. I really liked your story about your dad. My family wanted me to go to medical school also. It's unfortunate when a slow growing plant is not given the proper time to grow. Why are parents in such a hurry!
Duncan Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 11:26 PM
I like this rhyme of a limerick :)
Beaufort Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 4:13 PM
You are always welcome. I just got back from traveling and have severe jet lag. I couldn't bring myself to get here to respond to you until now. However--thank-you for your kind comment.
Burch Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 3:51 PM
Lol!! Delightfully clever!! Well done!! Deb
Beaufort Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 4:14 PM
I should have responded to you long ago. Let me say thank-you for your comment. I will read something of yours as well.
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 2:31 PM
You are the best at Limerick, Duke - Love it, funny !!! :) +:) - Have a relaxing weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Carrillo Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:22 AM
This is good Duke. I can be included here. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 3:18 PM
I believe you are speaking of my poetry..Ha! Ha!!..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
O'Leary Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 2:17 PM
Nice Limerick... unfortunately, too true... Terry
Squyres Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lol good one !!
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 9:01 PM
awesome limerick. I keep forgetting you are the limerick guy. If I had more time tonight, I would take a look at more!! Keep track of me, I really want to remember to see more limericks!!
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