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The Peace Sign

For me it brings both anger and joy
anger that we never seem to learn
war after awful war, so much loss
and for what? so people can line pockets

Do they not see the destruction 
the smouldering ruins of houses
that were someone's home
the bodies plied up in heaps?

Soldiers that have lived with death
on daily basis the horrific injuries
the knowledge they have taken souls
will be with them as long as they live

Joy when nice things happen
like nations shaking hands
when people speak out
condemning greedy politicians

Joy when lands are reforested
and pollution brought down low
new safe homes built for the poor
and clear skies adorn the land

I wish with all my strength
for peace world wide to reign
where none are scared or hungry
and all call each other brother or sister

No creed or race to divide
just love all over the world
this is what true peace should be
only then will the peace sign shine

written 02/21/2014

contest:The  Peace Sign

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/22/2014 3:52:00 PM
This is a powerful piece Shadow. Bravo!
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Date: 2/21/2014 7:39:00 PM
gosh, you did such a great job with that peace sign theme. You turned it into a poem for all humanity!!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/22/2014 4:23:00 AM
hi Andrea I have long felt for true peace all people and creeds need to become friends first for it to truly work naive of me I know. ty for your precious time and comments hugs
Date: 2/21/2014 1:04:00 PM
Nice write. I have one helpful suggestion: Why not correct the last line in your third verse by replacing "life's" with "lives" and replace "lives" in the previous line with "souls"? Apostrophes are used only when a genitive or possessive case is present.
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Date: 2/22/2014 4:21:00 AM
ty Robert I followed your advice good pick up ty so much hugs

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