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The Peace in Rice

Perfectly made rice, white Snow in a bowl - and peace steaming The bowl itself - masterful in its curves I sit at my desk - with this bowl of rice My world sinks in as my teeth feel, My tongue, the warmth, my eyes close again.

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Date: 12/17/2024 11:45:00 AM
My wife is Korean so yep, it's rice everyday, white, brown or black. Hey, welcome to PS!
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Date: 11/16/2024 4:43:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Christine K Munsell
Date: 11/16/2024 8:43:00 PM
Thank you for you kind words, Beata, they are very much appreciated.

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