The Patsy

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Princess the Chihuahua had to be spayed on Thursday..She is not feeling well..I feel for her..She seems to be in pain..Sara

Standing at the edge Fear~pain~or fun~fear~pain Big brown fearful eyes Begging help me... So I help her down onto the floor Picking up her chew stick Comes to me again Big brown sad eyes help me Understanding her agony Bend over lift her up Now she's in her comfort zone Chewing away on her bone Sitting next to the patsy

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Don Johnson

Date: 9/27/2011 6:34:00 PM

Yes we do what we can, to help an animal fellow man, and share his pain, he walks again, and love is in the trying...

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/26/2011 4:43:00 PM

A homley write Sara, Great normality to reflect upon..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/26/2011 11:34:00 AM

our pets are like our children..precious and so sear.. my son's dog is 10 now and has bad arthritis ..she does this to him and he is brought to tears watching her struggle to chew her treats too Sara... kindness is rewarded my friend ..lovely sweet compassionate lines..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2011 11:08:00 PM

ahhh, this is adorable, Sara. And my riddle poem was on flowing water, in case you didn't get it! Luv, Andrea

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 9/25/2011 7:24:00 AM

Must be a really cute pooch, and lucky to have you too. This ones very cute, Sara. A special thanks for sharing it

Jack Horne

Date: 9/24/2011 3:43:00 PM

Sweet piece for poor Princess, my friend. Does Patsy mean a sort of nurse? Or someone who pats, perhaps?

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/24/2011 3:42:00 PM

Aww what a sad tale..love,Deb

Wayne Sapp

Date: 9/24/2011 3:23:00 PM

Good stuff Sara. I volunteer at a Greyhound rescue place; I'm the Patsy for around 35 dogs. I like them much better than people. Wayne