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The Patio Doors

To go outside on the deck Two doors must be opened First the glass door to be unlocked Then the screen door opens next Two people working outside One person inside the house A person comes to the door Opens the screen door to speak "I need a bottle water please" The person inside the gives the water Person leaves the door sits on the grass Now the person insde has a good laugh

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/27/2020 12:21:00 PM

Well penned fun.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/27/2020 1:46:00 PM

Hello M.L. Kiser, Thank you for the lovely comment. Stay safe. Enjoy your day my friend. hugs.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/25/2020 2:17:00 PM

Oh dear.. What a lovely piece you have here. Your craft is definitely seasoned with lots of creativity. Great poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/25/2020 2:47:00 PM

Hello Funom Makama,Hi! Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/21/2020 8:01:00 AM

Hi Darlene you express yourself so well that you had me laughing also. Well penned my friend, have a lovely day. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/21/2020 12:59:00 PM

Hello Jennifer, thank you. I was outside visiting a neighbour, and this happened to her and her husband. It was hard not to laugh. Hugs my friend. Darlene

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/13/2020 11:01:00 PM

--- Just as I had a good laugh myself when I finished this poem, Darlene. Thank you very much, Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/14/2020 9:43:00 AM

Hello Gershon Wolf, I had a good laugh as I was creating this poem. You are welcome. Enjoy your day my firend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/12/2020 3:23:00 PM

I enjoyed this Darlene. I felt like I was there. Well done :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/12/2020 6:22:00 PM

Hello Heidi, oh! Heidi, thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.

V. Deepa

Date: 6/9/2020 10:24:00 AM

Aww ..you have beautifully described the scene Darlene mam.:-) Pretty work.Liked it. Have a lovely day.:-) Take care.Warm regards~Deepa

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/9/2020 12:26:00 PM

Hello Deepa,thank you Deepa, enjoy your day my friend.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/9/2020 3:27:00 AM

The the little things that makes us smile...Nice imagery

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/9/2020 7:51:00 AM

Hello Arturo Micheal, yes the little things do work to make us smile. Enjoy your day my friend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/8/2020 3:39:00 PM

Can just picture the scene Darlene, handy when it's really warm so you can keep them open. Hope you're well Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/8/2020 4:56:00 PM

Hello Tom Cunningham, Yes it is a scene to to picture.Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/8/2020 3:25:00 PM

A rather fine piece Darlene, so well put together, an enjoyable write!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/8/2020 4:57:00 PM

Hello Gordon McConnell,Hi,Gordon, thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/8/2020 2:15:00 PM

Hello Darlene! You have an artistic way to describe events or scenes that draws poets right in! It's magical really, I trust your day will be a joyful one. Feeling better and hugs~ PanagiotaXoxo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/8/2020 2:45:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, thank you Panagiota .Yes my day went well. thank you. I am glad that you are feeling better now.Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo