The Patio

On the patio, I saw a vision,
it was of a black dog.
Swimming in the ocean
I got caught in the motion,
flowing, flowing, flowing away. 
The avens weren't as lively
as I remembered on my patio. 
Sick to the stomach,
I fought the worms in the can
that I closed. 
Mumbling and hesitating,
I was on the patio of my life.
Eyes flashed close when 
I saw my home.  
It was a sombre lie of
happiness.
But Blackie got running,
he wasn't coming in anymore.
Life is a whole lot flare,
and my wooden house is 
a cabin of despair. 
Maybe this patio was good once,
but now all left is 'now'.
But all that matters is 'now'.
And all that I built
is just a broken house.
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Agustin Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 7:06 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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