The Patient Pantaloon

The Patient Pantaloon 
Nick Rush

With your dangling bells, and your trepid smile, your harlequin eyes, burn like coal 
With your windy heart, and your unguided fate, beyond sheer truth, lies a lost riddle
With your sunshine oozing through your tempest mask, boulders on both shoulders 
WIth your silhouette pressing from your feet to the floor, much colder each day older
With your enchanted soul, and your abstract sight, blocked by shadows, due to rue 
With your tangled thoughts, and your addled love, dolefulness heavy, que the blues
With that said you live to fight another day, or fight to live, which way will you sway?
With the glass half empty, still you can sip, imagine there is nothing, not even a drip.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/29/2015 12:05:00 PM
Thanks for the nice reply, on my comemnt... PD
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:43:00 AM
Impressive writing, you have skills. Congratulations.
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Nicholas Rush
Date: 3/24/2015 4:26:00 PM
thanks mate.!
Date: 3/21/2015 7:26:00 PM
NICHOLAS, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my latest blog "Old Men In Blue Jeans" if you'd like. Enjoy your win, LOVE LINDA
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Nicholas Rush
Date: 3/24/2015 4:25:00 PM
thanks cheers!
Date: 1/15/2015 11:59:00 PM
you are welcome ((regarding the bottom reply))
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Date: 1/10/2015 10:16:00 PM
Nicolas, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Nicholas Rush
Date: 1/11/2015 4:04:00 PM
thanks!
Date: 1/5/2015 5:31:00 AM
- A warm welcome to the P - Soup and into the new year 2015 - I look forward to reading more of your poems this year - I hope you will enjoy reading and writing with us, Nicholas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:50:00 PM
Nicholas, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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