The Patient In Room 407

She was just an old lady-
Brave and sweet and sad,
She was smart and she was quick
With eyes that didn't miss a lick.

She was my patient and my elder,
And she knew that this was it--
The end of a life well lived-
Six children raised and loved and fit.

Twelve grandchildren by her bedside
With tears of love and sorrow,
"If only we could borrow
A little more time" they cried.

She touched the hands that were extended,
Looked with pride and breathed a sigh,
"I'll always be near you because I love you"
She smiled and then she died.

The end of a life well lived
Six children raised and loved and fit.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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February 21, 2010 at 9:41 PM
Very moving, peaceful, and well written. David
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November 19, 2008 at 5:36 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Patricia. Love, Carol
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November 17, 2008 at 7:52 PM
Dear Patricia, Beautiful and heartwrenching with a valuable lesson to be learned. Wonderful wrinting! lainie
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November 17, 2008 at 12:10 PM
Nice tribute to someone who touched your life. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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November 17, 2008 at 9:25 AM
Congratulations Patricia on this very touching poem being featured. Vince
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November 17, 2008 at 6:25 AM
A lovely poem, and a wonderful tribute. Nicely done, and well deserved to be featured this week. ~ Carrie
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