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Contest... Write Six Beautiful lines...sponsor-Constance La France

The moon lights a glorious glowing path before us
like a splayed yellow band stretched to the stars
where we walk and listen to the nightbird sing
and allow our hearts to be moved by its melody
we hold the hand that flames the embers of our soul
and enter a rose colored rapture that joins our hearts

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Date: 3/21/2025 2:41:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.
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Date: 3/20/2025 6:56:00 AM
oh! congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/19/2025 1:24:00 PM
Gorgeous poetry Froid
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Date: 3/16/2025 8:40:00 AM
so beautiful and romantic Frederic, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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