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The path of bliss

A playful rhythm arises from within It is, it is, oh so mood uplifting Each breath intake sees joy afresh begin Light that ignites us, to vast space gifting The flame of bliss flickers not in the breeze Vagaries of fate have on us no hold Throb of rapture we embrace and release Our luminous aura now flaming gold Ah! Come on, come nearer, caress sublime Pristine presence presses forward its case Reverberates in heart the cosmic chime Truly love effervescence is God’s grace Moment to moment all moments entwined ~ Our consciousness is thus by bliss refined

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/19/2023 4:43:00 AM

Oh wow, this is such an insightful sonnet, full of wisdom and philosophical richness.. Your lines flow beautifully highlighting those truthful facts which shimmer in the actual essence of bliss.. So rightly you've said, "Vagaries of fate have on us no hold" Yes, indeed.. It is through all the hardships and exhaustions, that we truly attain the understanding of bliss.. Wonderfully crafted! :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/19/2023 4:53:00 AM

Thank you, Hiya :)

Bill Baker

Date: 12/18/2023 8:35:00 PM

A FAV for my list, Unseeking Seeker. Excellent match of title and sonnet. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/18/2023 8:44:00 PM

Thank you, dear Bill