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The Path I'M On

Nights once brought such pleasant dreams But the sweet memories no longer exist As persistent nightmares continue to insist Those dreamy-nights never belonged to me. Searching for meaning of this dubious feeling I surmise it emanates from spurious instincts Residing where he once held my throne Refusing to depart from the abandoned zone. In that desolate zone I don't linger any more Where maddening vibes squandered my love. My tears file a protest when eyes wish to cry Having fallen in vain like the petals gone dry. Petals that once brought me ardent fragrance Now claim flowers never perfumed my garden. Winds that blow from forest of barren trees Warn me, having blown away pristine leaves. Like a drifter I roam searching for answers But only questions surround the path I'm on. What right do I have of owning my dreams Having relinquished title to fond memories? May 2, 2018 Placed first in standard contest #135 by Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 1/27/2022 3:47:00 AM

Sometimes, we have to roam aimlessly with dried up hopes. But believe that fragrant flowers will once more bloom in your mind's garden ! A poem with an underlying tone of melancholy ! Very emotive.....

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/12/2018 5:26:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Vijay. Congrats on your top win.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/12/2018 4:00:00 PM

Yes, sometimes reality of life caresses the fantasy. Leaving thoughts- everywhere. Some moments are not meant to be, this is true. However- many moments truly are in your control. "Those dreamy-nights never belonged to me" Of course they do. In dreams, anything is possible. I like knowing this fact. :) Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/9/2018 4:25:00 AM

Hi Vijay, a deep piece of beautiful poetry from your golden pen. You let the emotions flow freely through this excellent write. You create a living canvas with your poetic words. I am glad I didn't miss this poetic gem. A fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 5/22/2018 12:28:00 PM

Deep and beautiful.

James Swartz

Date: 5/5/2018 12:56:00 PM

Perfect! Outstanding words to show the path you write about. Nothing desolate going on here Vijay only the great poetry you share with us.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/5/2018 4:00:00 PM

Appreciate your thoughts James..many thanks, as always!

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/5/2018 10:46:00 AM

Classic Poetry, Vijay,

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/5/2018 4:00:00 PM

Thank you Harry.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/4/2018 3:38:00 PM

Excellent poem on ships that--it seems-- have sailed. This piece really resonates with me, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/5/2018 3:59:00 PM

Thank you Janice..appreciate your comments, as always.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 5/4/2018 9:10:00 AM

This is so deep but beautiful. Lovely poetry. Well done.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/4/2018 2:32:00 PM

Thank you Supraja.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/4/2018 8:39:00 AM

You ink with beauty dear Vijay! We are into a world of nightmares, pain, confusion.. Abundance of fine contrasted feelings.. Expressed in an amazing imagery! Well crafted! A Beauty, a FAV. Stay bright

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/4/2018 2:32:00 PM

Thank you Besma..always appreciate and value your feedback.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2018 12:03:00 AM

You made it so sad, I am glad to hear it is only fiction, Vijay!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/4/2018 5:53:00 AM

Many thanks Andrea..life can be sad sometimes.

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/3/2018 3:13:00 PM

NO right at all...you gave it up...I like this approach, the personality and vision...All the best...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/3/2018 3:20:00 PM

Thank you Arturo.

Joseph May

Date: 5/3/2018 12:22:00 PM

Searching for meaning where dreams become blurred..Well written Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/3/2018 3:20:00 PM

Thank you Joseph.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/3/2018 11:55:00 AM

The cost of erasing the past comes at a dear price, Vijay. This reminds me of someone who has lost his memory and is trying to come to terms with it. But not all is lost! Hope could be the right path to follow. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/3/2018 12:02:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your thoughtful feedback Paul..many thanks.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/3/2018 8:48:00 AM

Such a powerful write, Vijay. Your words perfectly express the search for meaning, well done!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/3/2018 12:01:00 PM

Always appreciate your kind words..many thanks Mike.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/3/2018 7:50:00 AM

Even expressing pain and grief your poetry brings joy and consolation dear friend, , Vijay! Superb!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/3/2018 12:00:00 PM

Thank you my friend--always appreciate your visit and comments.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/2/2018 4:41:00 PM

Wow Vijay, this is so well done. It describes that desolate feeling of searching for answers in difficult times, so well! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/3/2018 6:11:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. You are so right about the desolate feeling. Appreciate your comments.