The Path Home

As we slowly near 
the end of our days. 
When we have finally
reached our old age.
There seems to be 
a sudden panic
to change our ways.

The tunnel to the light has gotten
a whole lot shorter.
So now we seek to put our
spiritual house in order.

At one time to have a better life
and I wants were our fervrant prayers.
These days it's a prayer of contrition
hoping to keep the light on until we can get there.

This is now an edited and up dated version of this poem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/18/2017 12:28:00 PM
Just a shout-out post to all Terry Lee's friends and followers: My Dear sister Terry Lee made 'the Transition' at the end of January 2017. In an effort to preserve her work; I am reviewing all her poems. As I scan through your comments, I discover aspects of Terry I had not been in touch with; and I appreciate your compassionate, kind words; gifts that have facilitated my own comfort. Consciousness is energy we all share which cannot be destroyed. Thanks to all of you. Thom Allen
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Date: 6/3/2012 7:27:00 PM
I find that as I reach 64 I feel settled and ready. There really is no reason to fear for He is always near. God bless, Keith
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 3/25/2013 8:19:00 PM
I plan to live life to it's fullest until I no longer can after all it all goes by too fast as it is and tomorrow I am 66. Huggs TLee
Date: 5/30/2012 4:17:00 PM
The bitter truth is intense and so true Terry. You touch a chord as I am getting there and it seems a struggle to separate the good from the bad at times. Love this bit of wisdom!
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Date: 5/30/2012 4:46:00 PM
As I am aproaching old age at what seems a rapid pace I have observed this phenomenon. I am now and will to the end be the christian I am now and have always been. Thanks so much for coming by to review this work of mine. TLee
Date: 5/18/2012 5:22:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem, Terry of how it is with,oldies, i know i'm one. harry
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Date: 5/18/2012 7:52:00 AM
Hey Harry if your an oldie then who's the young guy in the picture? Glad you like the poem and thanks for the review. Huggs TLee
Date: 5/17/2012 4:02:00 AM
Enjoyed the write.From your comment below this meant to be funny about how people become more religious towards later part of thier life.This is true for all the religions I think.Worse sinners make better religious persons.
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Date: 5/17/2012 12:43:00 PM
To me I find it funny that they wait till almost the very end to try and save their imortal souls. Thanks Kash for coming to review. Huggs TLee
Date: 5/16/2012 4:17:00 AM
Terry, my light started getting closer years ago, very thoughtful write...David
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/16/2012 4:28:00 AM
Actually it was ment to be a funny. Thanks for your kind words and loyal reviews. Huggs TLee
Date: 5/16/2012 3:55:00 AM
How poignantly true... Nice... Terry
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/16/2012 4:30:00 AM
This was ment to be a hmmm funny kind of truth. A bit of satire. Did you get my soup? Huggs TLee
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