Terry L. Allen Poet Rhyme

The Path Home

As we slowly near 
the end of our days. 
When we have finally
reached our old age.
There seems to be 
a sudden panic
to change our ways.

The tunnel to the light has gotten
a whole lot shorter.
So now we seek to put our
spiritual house in order.

At one time to have a better life
and I wants were our fervrant prayers.
These days it's a prayer of contrition
hoping to keep the light on until we can get there.

This is now an edited and up dated version of this poem.

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Thom Allen March 18, 2017 at 12:28 PM Just a shout-out post to all Terry Lee's friends and followers: My Dear sister Terry Lee made 'the Transition' at the end of January 2017. In an effort to preserve her work; I am reviewing all her poems. As I scan through your comments, I discover aspects of Terry I had not been in touch with; and I appreciate your compassionate, kind words; gifts that have facilitated my own comfort. Consciousness is energy we all share which cannot be destroyed. Thanks to all of you. Thom Allen

Keith Bickerstaffe June 3, 2012 at 7:27 PM I find that as I reach 64 I feel settled and ready. There really is no reason to fear for He is always near. God bless, Keith Terry L. Allen March 25, 2013 at 8:19 PM I plan to live life to it's fullest until I no longer can after all it all goes by too fast as it is and tomorrow I am 66. Huggs TLee

Elizabeth Wesley May 30, 2012 at 4:17 PM The bitter truth is intense and so true Terry. You touch a chord as I am getting there and it seems a struggle to separate the good from the bad at times. Love this bit of wisdom! Terry L. Allen May 30, 2012 at 4:46 PM As I am aproaching old age at what seems a rapid pace I have observed this phenomenon. I am now and will to the end be the christian I am now and have always been. Thanks so much for coming by to review this work of mine. TLee

Harry Horsman May 18, 2012 at 5:22 AM This is a wonderful poem, Terry of how it is with,oldies, i know i'm one. harry Terry L. Allen May 18, 2012 at 7:52 AM Hey Harry if your an oldie then who's the young guy in the picture? Glad you like the poem and thanks for the review. Huggs TLee

Kash Poet May 17, 2012 at 4:02 AM Enjoyed the write.From your comment below this meant to be funny about how people become more religious towards later part of thier life.This is true for all the religions I think.Worse sinners make better religious persons. Terry L. Allen May 17, 2012 at 12:43 PM To me I find it funny that they wait till almost the very end to try and save their imortal souls. Thanks Kash for coming to review. Huggs TLee

David Williams May 16, 2012 at 4:17 AM Terry, my light started getting closer years ago, very thoughtful write...David Terry L. Allen May 16, 2012 at 4:28 AM Actually it was ment to be a funny. Thanks for your kind words and loyal reviews. Huggs TLee

Terry O'Leary May 16, 2012 at 3:55 AM How poignantly true... Nice... Terry Terry L. Allen May 16, 2012 at 4:30 AM This was ment to be a hmmm funny kind of truth. A bit of satire. Did you get my soup? Huggs TLee