The Patch

We live in the Patch, our own little town
Got a grocery store and three bars
We got a row of shanties, company owned
Ain’t got much space to park our cars
Yous guys got it made so don’t be complainin’
Workin’ out in all that sunshine
We gotta load 16 tons to make a livin’
Can’t breathe too good down in the mine.
We ain’t doin’ too bad from pay to pay
Barely make the bills and no damn more
Ernie was right when he sang that song
About owin’ our soul to the company store.
Got me a couple of kids and a good woman
Wednesday afternoon and Sundays I get some rest
Not much pay, but a honest days work
Livin’ in America, we sure are blessed.
Billy was hurt over in number eleven
Ain’t gonna make it in to work today
Gotta stop over and see him before I go in
Check on his kids, make sure they’re okay
Gotta get goin’ now, give me a hug
Gonna stop for a few on my way home too
Take Billy over some of your fried chicken
Ask Mary if there’s anything else we can do.
Livin’ in the Patch, not much changes
Got good neighbors and a place to lay your head
Work hard, play hard and damn proud of it
We sleep pretty good when we go to bed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Zzzzz Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 5:38 AM
A good write, and one that I can identify with...I never worked in a mine, but I spent almost 40 years working in factories and warehouses, bending my back and lifting heavy loads. A poignant poem.
George   Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 1:55 AM
You paint a very vivid picture of many of the little towns that make America. You are a great writier my friend, Love, Lainie
Jordan Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 7:15 AM
You know Vince I just love your poetry it always seems to take me back home to my grandparents house - Thank you Vince for your support and encouragement/ friendship these last few years - My life is really taking off in wonderful directions in fact - it can only brighten from here - Love & Respects to you Vince - God Bless, mj
Iloduba Jnr Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 2:28 PM
Makes me tink of the Coal camp here in Nigeria.U bring out creativity out of simplicity.cheers!
Freeman Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 2:22 PM
Sounds like the good old days Vince, where poor people has poor ways. I remember some saw mill days in my youth. When the day's work was done, sleep was fun. Sincerely Moses
Fraser Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 12:02 PM
Wonderful poem Vince, this was a delight to read>>James
Richards Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 1:07 PM
People who work hard, play hard, who are good neighbors, and take care of their responsibilites are the true heart of what makes a good country. Earthy, salty, and real down to earth poetry!! :) great job, Vince! ~ God Bless..Carrie
Guzzi Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 11:53 AM
hard work always gives a good night sleep! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 10:30 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Vince. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 9:15 AM
Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara
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