The Passive Voice

THE PASSIVE VOICE (Grammar series)

In Italy a glorious Voice 
Was employed by Pavarotti
In England of voice we’ve a choice
Which sounds a little dotty

When we sing our verbs of action
The way we do, it sounds as if
We’re committing a verbal infraction
For these words can be voiced in the PASSIVE

Just consider: if someone is active
There is something that someone is doing
And you'd  think that being passive
Means that doing they are eschewing

But we need not be hopeless or cynical
Say it' s  British illogic - insanity
We'll be annoyingly rational and clinical
Causing foreigners to express profanity

However you parse it or say it
While in both voices something is done
In the ACTIVE we say who did it 
But in PASSIVE might not say which one

So in solving a murder for the fun of it
And answering: "Who fired the gun?"
We need not claim the butler 'dun of it'
But inscrutably say: "It was done"

Thus the PASSIVE is my voice of choice
For my deeds despicable or infractive
But for actions worth merit, that I rejoice
I will happily indulge in the ACTIVE.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/17/2017 8:47:00 AM
very intriguing, geoffrey! i look forward to reading more of your work...
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Date: 6/17/2017 4:12:00 AM
A literary gem from the master of English grammar Geoff, which I know so well from your contributions in the last site. I'm so glad you have become an ACTIVE voice on this site. Nice work ...Maria PS passive voice and active voice grammar was always confusing for me at school - Perhaps I was too Passive back then and now I just choose to be Active :)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/17/2017 4:42:00 AM
Thank you Maria. With you and Cecilia there, I feel that I am among good friends. Stay forever active!
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