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The Passionate Poet To His Love

Based on Christopher Marlowe’s “Passionate Shepherd To His Love” Come be with me and become my love And we shall prove my dreams correct, That if you join in love with me Another woman I’ll never need And we will sit among the trees Seeing both the birds and bees, By the water as it falls The birds will sing as passion calls And I will make you very happy Try and please you ever gladly, Send you flowers at anytime Romantic moonlight as we dine Off we go a rendezvous A subtle point that no one knew, We’d sit and talk and view the sky Then I’d get lost inside your eyes I’d whisper soft some poetry By many poets including me, And if these dreams of mine you like Come be with me and become my love I’d wish to see you everyday To show my love a different way, If these my dreams you like so much Then be with me and become my love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 11/14/2013 6:00:00 PM
And you say I'm the one kickin' game : ) Good job
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Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
Date: 11/14/2013 10:16:00 PM
LOL!!! My Man...! I appreciate it Bro, I wrote this one a long time ago in high school, so yeah you right, I might have been kickin' game with this...LOL! Thanks for the visit PJ!!! MC
Date: 7/27/2013 8:19:00 PM
What a beautiful poem to your love!!!
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Marquis MC Mills-Cooper
Date: 7/28/2013 10:52:00 AM
Thanks! I wrote this when I was 15 or 16 thinking I could take a crack at an old poetic giant like Chris Marlowe. I kept thinking, his poem is so materialistic, I'm going to make mine about love. LOL! Ahhh youth! Gotta love it! MC
Date: 7/13/2013 1:30:00 PM
It seems that I remember the poem from which you wrote this one..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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