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The Passion of a Jue Ju

Passionate purple, ruby red petals
Soft, moist, pursed and waiting
Opening gently awaiting sensual kiss
Bee surrenders entering inviting abyss


25th July 2014

Written for Passion of a Jue JuContest Sponsored By Nette Onclaud

submitted to bite size poetry contest No 16 sponsored by Line Gauthier

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2014

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Carol Mitra Date: 8/10/2021 9:17:00 PM Very nice Jan....Congrats on your win :) Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 8/10/2021 7:29:00 PM Ooh la la! Such a steamy write even if it is about bees. lol Congrats on your win, Jan! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/10/2021 9:12:00 AM Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write on the bees. Have a blessed day with your win............... Login to Reply

Gary Radice Date: 8/9/2021 1:25:00 PM It's taken a seven year old Jan Allison poem that I really enjoyed reading to open my eyes as to what a Jue Ju actually is. I had never heard of this type of poetry before. Now, I have to go and find out more about these 'Tang Dynasty' quatrains. :) Cheers - Gary Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/9/2021 1:41:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this fine write, Jan:) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/9/2021 6:30:00 AM Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance Date: 8/5/2014 6:13:00 PM Applause!! grats on joining me in the sixth place slot, I am honored to share it with you! You rock Jan :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/5/2014 6:13:00 PM I'm delighted to share it with a lovely friend who inspires me so much:-) Hugs jan xxx check new poems!!!

Robert Lindley Date: 8/4/2014 8:59:00 PM Birds and the bees, honey that sweetly brings me to my knees. Love this one my friend! Big congrats on your win!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/5/2014 11:48:00 AM Thank you for the lovely comment Robert I was so pleased to be placed in Nette's contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/4/2014 4:38:00 PM well, there is nothing that beats the birds and the bees!!! YOu are spot on for theme!! GREAT job and congrats for your win. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/4/2014 4:40:00 PM Thanks for the lovely comment Andrea. I find Nette's contests so inspiring with the new forms she finds for us to tackle:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 8/4/2014 11:17:00 AM Back again with Congratulations!! very merited win! // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/4/2014 11:23:00 AM Thanks so much for taking the time to comment Paul I do appreciate it:-) I really enjoyed this challenge from Nette she inspires me to try my best! Hugs Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/4/2014 7:50:00 AM Well crafted and apt interpretation of the picture, Jan. congrats Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/4/2014 9:04:00 AM Thank you so much for those lovely words Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/4/2014 7:31:00 AM Passionate write Jan ! Congrats on huge win my friend! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/4/2014 9:03:00 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Dr Sharma i was delighted to get placed in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith Date: 8/4/2014 3:52:00 AM Buzzing by to say congrats..... Hugs Tim Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/4/2014 4:28:00 AM Aww thanks so much Tim I'm delighted to be placed in Nettes contest she always inspires me to try my best:-) Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 7/30/2014 8:58:00 AM sexy xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/30/2014 9:01:00 AM Thanks for dropping by Mandy. Hugs Jan xxx

Steve Harris Date: 7/27/2014 7:00:00 PM Beautifully seductive! I love it! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/29/2014 7:37:00 PM Thanks Steve:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 7/27/2014 6:17:00 PM I love your take on this one, Jan! Pure seduction...enticement...and allure. gl. // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/29/2014 7:37:00 PM Thank you so much Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Mohn Date: 7/26/2014 8:05:00 PM This is just wonderful Jan...good luck in the contest! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/29/2014 7:36:00 PM Thanks David:-) Hugs jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/26/2014 11:00:00 AM wowowow, sensual in a sweet way!! LOVE it. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/29/2014 7:36:00 PM Thanks Andrea your comments mean the world to me you so inspire me:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 7/26/2014 5:15:00 AM a beautifully sensual little verse; I like the alliteration you've used in this - good luck in the contest! thanks for commenting on my tritina; sadly the poem is true Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/29/2014 7:36:00 PM Thanks for the lovely comment Charlotte:-) Hugs jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/25/2014 7:58:00 PM I love the passion, luring the bee, into something beautiful and needed... Jan, thank you for the precious imagery... forever Linda Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/26/2014 4:04:00 AM Thanks Linda for the lovely comment. I do hope things in your life get better the power of your last poem brought me to tears my friend. Hugs jan xxx

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/25/2014 4:23:00 PM Oh, I like, I like! This one should do great in the contest. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/25/2014 4:25:00 PM wow thanks so much Connie for the lovely comment - i enjoyed the challenge :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Barbara Gorelick Date: 7/25/2014 2:44:00 PM Now this is great! Im struggling with this one..Im sure you have a top winner here. BG Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/25/2014 3:37:00 PM Oh Thanks so much Barbara for your lovely comment. I love the challenges Nette sets us and this one was fun:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Matthew Anish Date: 7/25/2014 11:22:00 AM Highly enjoyable work here! Nice personification! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/25/2014 12:04:00 PM Thanks for dropping by Matthew. Hugs Jan xxx

Gry Christensen Date: 7/25/2014 10:51:00 AM I like this! I find it fascination when in a poem, there are double layers, sometimes even more, when it comes to meaning............nothing is spelled out clearly............things are written out between the lines. You do it very well! I wish you the best of luck in the competition. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/25/2014 10:53:00 AM Thanks for the lovely comment. this is the first time I've seen this form so I thought I would give it a go. Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 7/25/2014 8:30:00 AM How beautiful Jan.....to be a bee...bzzzz....hugs Tim Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/25/2014 8:33:00 AM Thanks Tim I wasn't sure about the ending:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance Date: 7/25/2014 8:19:00 AM ooohhh beautiful :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 7/25/2014 8:19:00 AM So is yours!!!! Hugs jan xxx

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