Jan Allison Poet Verse

The Passion of a Jue Ju

Passionate purple, ruby red petals
Soft, moist, pursed and waiting
Opening gently awaiting sensual kiss
Bee surrenders entering inviting abyss


25th July 2014

Written for Passion of a Jue JuContest Sponsored By Nette Onclaud

submitted to bite size poetry contest No 16 sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Carol Mitra August 10, 2021 at 9:17 PM Very nice Jan....Congrats on your win :)

Kim Merryman August 10, 2021 at 7:29 PM Ooh la la! Such a steamy write even if it is about bees. lol Congrats on your win, Jan! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith August 10, 2021 at 9:12 AM Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write on the bees. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Gary Radice August 9, 2021 at 1:25 PM It's taken a seven year old Jan Allison poem that I really enjoyed reading to open my eyes as to what a Jue Ju actually is. I had never heard of this type of poetry before. Now, I have to go and find out more about these 'Tang Dynasty' quatrains. :) Cheers - Gary

Joanna Daniel August 9, 2021 at 1:41 AM Congratulations on your win with this fine write, Jan:) Jan Allison August 9, 2021 at 6:30 AM Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance August 5, 2014 at 6:13 PM Applause!! grats on joining me in the sixth place slot, I am honored to share it with you! You rock Jan :) Jan Allison August 5, 2014 at 6:13 PM I'm delighted to share it with a lovely friend who inspires me so much:-) Hugs jan xxx check new poems!!!

Robert Lindley August 4, 2014 at 8:59 PM Birds and the bees, honey that sweetly brings me to my knees. Love this one my friend! Big congrats on your win!! Jan Allison August 5, 2014 at 11:48 AM Thank you for the lovely comment Robert I was so pleased to be placed in Nette's contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2014 at 4:38 PM well, there is nothing that beats the birds and the bees!!! YOu are spot on for theme!! GREAT job and congrats for your win. Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 4:40 PM Thanks for the lovely comment Andrea. I find Nette's contests so inspiring with the new forms she finds for us to tackle:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus August 4, 2014 at 11:17 AM Back again with Congratulations!! very merited win! // paul Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 11:23 AM Thanks so much for taking the time to comment Paul I do appreciate it:-) I really enjoyed this challenge from Nette she inspires me to try my best! Hugs Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta August 4, 2014 at 7:50 AM Well crafted and apt interpretation of the picture, Jan. congrats Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 9:04 AM Thank you so much for those lovely words Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 4, 2014 at 7:31 AM Passionate write Jan ! Congrats on huge win my friend! Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 9:03 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Dr Sharma i was delighted to get placed in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith August 4, 2014 at 3:52 AM Buzzing by to say congrats..... Hugs Tim Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 4:28 AM Aww thanks so much Tim I'm delighted to be placed in Nettes contest she always inspires me to try my best:-) Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl July 30, 2014 at 8:58 AM sexy xx Jan Allison July 30, 2014 at 9:01 AM Thanks for dropping by Mandy. Hugs Jan xxx

Steve Harris July 27, 2014 at 7:00 PM Beautifully seductive! I love it! Jan Allison July 29, 2014 at 7:37 PM Thanks Steve:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus July 27, 2014 at 6:17 PM I love your take on this one, Jan! Pure seduction...enticement...and allure. gl. // paul Jan Allison July 29, 2014 at 7:37 PM Thank you so much Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Mohn July 26, 2014 at 8:05 PM This is just wonderful Jan...good luck in the contest! Jan Allison July 29, 2014 at 7:36 PM Thanks David:-) Hugs jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2014 at 11:00 AM wowowow, sensual in a sweet way!! LOVE it. Jan Allison July 29, 2014 at 7:36 PM Thanks Andrea your comments mean the world to me you so inspire me:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Charlotte Puddifoot July 26, 2014 at 5:15 AM a beautifully sensual little verse; I like the alliteration you've used in this - good luck in the contest! thanks for commenting on my tritina; sadly the poem is true Jan Allison July 29, 2014 at 7:36 PM Thanks for the lovely comment Charlotte:-) Hugs jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A July 25, 2014 at 7:58 PM I love the passion, luring the bee, into something beautiful and needed... Jan, thank you for the precious imagery... forever Linda Jan Allison July 26, 2014 at 4:04 AM Thanks Linda for the lovely comment. I do hope things in your life get better the power of your last poem brought me to tears my friend. Hugs jan xxx

Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2014 at 4:23 PM Oh, I like, I like! This one should do great in the contest. Jan Allison July 25, 2014 at 4:25 PM wow thanks so much Connie for the lovely comment - i enjoyed the challenge :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Barbara Gorelick July 25, 2014 at 2:44 PM Now this is great! Im struggling with this one..Im sure you have a top winner here. BG Jan Allison July 25, 2014 at 3:37 PM Oh Thanks so much Barbara for your lovely comment. I love the challenges Nette sets us and this one was fun:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Matthew Anish July 25, 2014 at 11:22 AM Highly enjoyable work here! Nice personification! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Jan Allison July 25, 2014 at 12:04 PM Thanks for dropping by Matthew. Hugs Jan xxx

Gry Christensen July 25, 2014 at 10:51 AM I like this! I find it fascination when in a poem, there are double layers, sometimes even more, when it comes to meaning............nothing is spelled out clearly............things are written out between the lines. You do it very well! I wish you the best of luck in the competition. Jan Allison July 25, 2014 at 10:53 AM Thanks for the lovely comment. this is the first time I've seen this form so I thought I would give it a go. Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith July 25, 2014 at 8:30 AM How beautiful Jan.....to be a bee...bzzzz....hugs Tim Jan Allison July 25, 2014 at 8:33 AM Thanks Tim I wasn't sure about the ending:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance July 25, 2014 at 8:19 AM ooohhh beautiful :) Jan Allison July 25, 2014 at 8:19 AM So is yours!!!! Hugs jan xxx

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