The Passing

I never knew her by name
  yet her sun kissed auburn hair
  I lived a lifetime with
  nor did she ever
  flip a glance my way
 how sure I was
  we once grew old together
  Her piercing green eyes
  like precious jewels
  peering miles in front of her
  toward greener pastures
  to  all  places
  angels go dream
  How whimsical of me
  I thought to myself
  to have loved her forever
  as her train rumbled pass me
  in the opposite direction
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 1:31 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Samuels Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 11:09 PM
Loved it!
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February 7, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Ju Ju Peppellini,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 12, 2016 at 2:36 PM
Sonny Ju Ju, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ---SKAT
Mamabolo Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 7:18 AM
Hello Sonny; Interesting and lovely to read, "How you loved thee",... Lekau
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