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The Passing

I never knew her by name yet her sun kissed auburn hair I lived a lifetime with nor did she ever flip a glance my way how sure I was we once grew old together Her piercing green eyes like precious jewels peering miles in front of her toward greener pastures to all places angels go dream How whimsical of me I thought to myself to have loved her forever as her train rumbled pass me in the opposite direction

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Date: 12/5/2024 1:31:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 4/17/2018 11:09:00 PM
Loved it!
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:41:00 AM
Ju Ju Peppellini,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:36:00 PM
Sonny Ju Ju, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ---SKAT
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Date: 12/2/2013 7:18:00 AM
Hello Sonny; Interesting and lovely to read, "How you loved thee",... Lekau
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