The Passing- - -A Senryu String

she mused while fondly touching his chair his scent lingers the salty taste of yesterday tears she tastes again brushing it aside she again asks the question only she can have knowing the answer she didn’t muse the question why did he go first his next day clothes always neatly in the same spot freshly pressed his breakfast waiting steaming on a heated plate even on April first bath water always drawn, along with a prod he loved to tease in the bedroom well, she would reserve comment for his ears only he had to go first he knew, she knew, God knew and she saw to it. a double dose of what she gave to him just to be sure a call to her sis the only living relative to say good bye Dec 2012 Charles Henderson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/10/2013 7:22:00 PM
Is this what I think it is??? oh my!!
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Date: 1/10/2013 7:22:00 PM
well, I saw all of December. If I have time I will return to see November haiku!
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Date: 12/7/2012 9:35:00 AM
Charles Your poem's beginning brought me through grief in the all too horrifying details. Little did I know where you poem would take me. What a woman.
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Date: 12/2/2012 2:46:00 AM
Chas, now this for me is very good, I like way you told it in this form and not just in verse....Dave
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