The Party

The host was the most, an elegant man,
Who throws great parties like no one else can.
All were dressed to the nines for a special affair,
While men peeked at bosoms and tried not to stare.

The gathering together of local folks,
Were sitting and telling some witty jokes;
While ladies who came dressed in the latest style,
Vied with each other for a gentleman’s smile.

Candles were lit, the music played low,
The table was set in perfection’s glow;
With goblets of wine and bone china plates,
That defined the mind with earnest debates.

The fragrance of food that smelled so fine,
Was delivered with bottles of sweet scented wine;
And great steaming bowls of chicken soup,
Were served in style with a sterling silver scoop.

Roast beef with gravy was served with care,
With mashed potatoes and all the fanfare.
There were squash, carrots and dishes of beans,
And bowls of crisp chopped salad greens.

There was wine to sip and coffee to drink,
There was so much to eat, no one could think;
There was cake to splurge and gin to purge,
And all who ate quickly lost the urge.

The hours ticked by with buttons undone,
That belied the gourmet from having fun;
 For lessons they learned were simple and few,
A waist filled with haste is hard to undo.


 






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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/26/2011 12:30:00 PM
I've read this before, just didn't get the chance to comment. This is what you call very clever and entertaining. You truly do write with God on your shoulder.
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Date: 8/19/2011 9:01:00 AM
very true for us (men) i would say. until now i used to think this happened only in my part of the world. Men are all the same aroung the globe i guess, when it comes to (b)eating food. VERY VERY well written
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Date: 8/15/2011 11:28:00 PM
Oh! This get together sounds all so tasty my friend. Tastebuds now screaming. A write full o fgreat taste indeed. Party on!
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Date: 8/14/2011 1:14:00 PM
haha wow, How I wished I was at that party! Sounds like one scrumptious gathering! And you are so great with your rhymes, really enjoyed reading this-- *burp*! :) Oh excuse me :) ....thank you as well for dropping by my poems :) hugs to you!
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:58:00 PM
Dang this one really got me hungry! Wouldn't mind being at this Party, accompanied by you my poetic friend: )
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Date: 8/13/2011 10:32:00 AM
Your poem is as eloquent as your party is lavish! Splendid write, Liz! Love, Robert.
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Date: 8/13/2011 6:59:00 AM
oh, elizabeth.. your impressions and lyrical thoughts fill me to the brim.. astounding feast of a poem..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:35:00 AM
Hi! Friend, Genius. No gap lies between observation and words, felt and written nicely. Wonderfully penned. Read it and loved it. Thanks for early comment. bl
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Date: 8/13/2011 12:09:00 AM
very well done Elizabeth. Youve got quatrains couplets and rhymne all in one in this delightful people watcher poem and it's on the mark in the social arena. Thanks for your comment
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Date: 8/12/2011 11:06:00 PM
superb descriptive lines elizabeth of the party goers and the scene... nice closing with a bit of wit..luv.. if for a contest..a sure winning piece.. good luck luv..
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Date: 8/12/2011 10:44:00 PM
A super write my friend with great imagery and good rhyme and rhythm. Love the message. "Gluttony is a sin in more ways than one." God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/12/2011 10:32:00 PM
Wow Elizabeth, this is quite a write! I loved the flow you penned so greatly! Not to mention the great imagery that you perfected during this poem! I loved it!!
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Date: 8/12/2011 9:57:00 PM
An orgy of food, with those buttons undone. Lead me to THIS party. heehee. Is this for a contest, Sweetie, Great description of the party. LUv, andrea
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Date: 8/12/2011 9:49:00 PM
Oh, yes; I did catch the humor of the 'fun' at the finish.
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Date: 8/12/2011 9:46:00 PM
Love those parties, and I always eat too much. You are a deft, skillful poet. Thank you for your flattery; I'll suck up all I can get. Cock-a-doodle-doo!
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Date: 8/12/2011 7:02:00 PM
Sunbeams abound! This is a crack-up! I bow, Elizabeth. Thank you.
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Date: 8/12/2011 5:37:00 PM
LOL great write with many smiles coming form this.... Michael
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Date: 8/12/2011 5:36:00 PM
different subject matter, with a fun twist, reminds me of the big parties in Englands Big houses in the Country. Lovely descriptions, I have Chatsworth house just a few miles away. Probably one of the best in the World. another lovely write Elizabeth. Steven
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