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The Partition

a silken wall beyond earthly realms that separates us all from the great mystery no mortal can see lest He should call Written 9/24/13 by Andrea Dietrich for nette onclaud's POEM OF COMPRESSION Poetry Contes

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/29/2013 10:41:00 PM

nice one. love phyl

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 10/23/2013 10:31:00 PM

Wonderful poem you have written here. Congratulations on your win.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/13/2013 7:54:00 AM

Well done, I had expected to see this one on the list

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/10/2013 8:26:00 PM

Andrea, ... Congratulations on your awesome win in Nette's contest... always~ LINDA

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/10/2013 9:25:00 AM

Beautiful. I don't know what else to say.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 10/9/2013 10:25:00 AM

Love your thought-provoking words...inspiring and beautiful! Congrats on your win! Love and blessings, Rhonda

Skat A

Date: 10/8/2013 8:20:00 PM

sweet win Andrea...............SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2013 12:00:00 PM

Congrats on your excellent winning work..Enjoyed the touch of spiritual influence in the lines..Sara

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 10/6/2013 3:19:00 PM

Awesome write and win Andrea! Hugs

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/6/2013 12:29:00 PM

Wonderful and lovely write,great friend.CONGRATULATIONS!!

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/5/2013 6:37:00 PM

congrats on your great win :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/5/2013 5:38:00 PM

Great poem and win Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/5/2013 10:23:00 AM

A more spiritual route you took with this one! Well done, Andrea.....nice to share the spot with one who excels at each verse she writes!! :) Congratulations!

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/5/2013 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win friend Andrea. It's awesome! Have a nice weekend ;) hugs,

Kash Poet

Date: 10/5/2013 9:15:00 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea!Loved it.

Joseph May

Date: 10/5/2013 7:59:00 AM

beautifully written Andrea....congrats on your win

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/4/2013 10:29:00 PM

Sagacious. Inspired title. Thought provoking idea of what separates us. Take care, Richard

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 10/3/2013 5:22:00 PM

Goose bumps... I can see the Glory roll and I find the title absolutely magic; music, fate, planned choregraphy, anything that suggests secret majesty and the greatest power of all... Goose bumps and hope! Thanks for sharing, Andrea and a winner for sure as always! How can you stay so creative all the time!!!? Love, Hanitra

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/30/2013 7:56:00 AM

One word Andrea, Awesome! Absolutely love this write of yours. Definitely gonna see this on the winner's list.. I am doing good thanks, just had a hectic weekend.. How are things on your side?

Robert Johnson

Date: 9/26/2013 10:25:00 AM

Such a dagger of faith in this one. Love to bleed like this. :) Peace.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/26/2013 8:16:00 AM

We are on similar wave lengths but you are less verbose.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/26/2013 3:46:00 AM

This beauty makes me reflect about my faith dear.Is He so far?Is He so close..How is it there?Who am I here?.An introspective thought which makes me ponder.So inspiring.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/25/2013 9:46:00 PM

This is short, but good for the contest. Good night.... Lucilla

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/25/2013 7:47:00 PM

You have written a beautiful write my friend! Your expression is tremendous, a lovely poem! Great Work!!

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/25/2013 7:45:00 PM

wow...you penned a great poem....love it, am sure it will do well in the contest :)