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The Partition

a silken wall

beyond earthly realms

separates us all

from the great mystery

no mortal can see

lest He should call



Written 9/24/13 by Andrea Dietrich
for nette onclaud's POEM OF COMPRESSION Poetry Contes

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Phyllis Babcock

October 29, 2013 at 10:41 PM

nice one. love phyl

Jon A Cavanaugh

October 23, 2013 at 10:31 PM

Wonderful poem you have written here. Congratulations on your win.

Richard Lamoureux

October 13, 2013 at 7:54 AM

Well done, I had expected to see this one on the list

Poet Destroyer A

October 10, 2013 at 8:26 PM

Andrea, ... Congratulations on your awesome win in Nette's contest... always~ LINDA

Monterey Sirak

October 10, 2013 at 9:25 AM

Beautiful. I don't know what else to say.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

October 9, 2013 at 10:25 AM

Love your thought-provoking words...inspiring and beautiful! Congrats on your win! Love and blessings, Rhonda

Skat A

October 8, 2013 at 8:20 PM

sweet win Andrea...............SKAT

Sara Kendrick

October 7, 2013 at 12:00 PM

Congrats on your excellent winning work..Enjoyed the touch of spiritual influence in the lines..Sara

Cecilia Macfarlane

October 6, 2013 at 3:19 PM

Awesome write and win Andrea! Hugs

Olusegun Arowolo

October 6, 2013 at 12:29 PM

Wonderful and lovely write,great friend.CONGRATULATIONS!!

Sandra Adams

October 5, 2013 at 6:37 PM

congrats on your great win :)

Joyce Johnson

October 5, 2013 at 5:38 PM

Great poem and win Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

October 5, 2013 at 10:23 AM

A more spiritual route you took with this one! Well done, Andrea.....nice to share the spot with one who excels at each verse she writes!! :) Congratulations!

Bukang Liwayway

October 5, 2013 at 9:45 AM

Congratulations on your win friend Andrea. It's awesome! Have a nice weekend ;) hugs,

Kash Poet

October 5, 2013 at 9:15 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea!Loved it.

Joseph May

October 5, 2013 at 7:59 AM

beautifully written Andrea....congrats on your win

Richard D Seal

October 4, 2013 at 10:29 PM

Sagacious. Inspired title. Thought provoking idea of what separates us. Take care, Richard

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

October 3, 2013 at 5:22 PM

Goose bumps... I can see the Glory roll and I find the title absolutely magic; music, fate, planned choregraphy, anything that suggests secret majesty and the greatest power of all... Goose bumps and hope! Thanks for sharing, Andrea and a winner for sure as always! How can you stay so creative all the time!!!? Love, Hanitra

Wilma Neels

September 30, 2013 at 7:56 AM

One word Andrea, Awesome! Absolutely love this write of yours. Definitely gonna see this on the winner's list.. I am doing good thanks, just had a hectic weekend.. How are things on your side?

Robert Johnson

September 26, 2013 at 10:25 AM

Such a dagger of faith in this one. Love to bleed like this. :) Peace.

Richard Lamoureux

September 26, 2013 at 8:16 AM

We are on similar wave lengths but you are less verbose.

Charmaine Chircop

September 26, 2013 at 3:46 AM

This beauty makes me reflect about my faith dear.Is He so far?Is He so close..How is it there?Who am I here?.An introspective thought which makes me ponder.So inspiring.