The Park

Today, I saw you walking down the street;
the one that curves around, then through the park.
I heard the laughter of the children as
they ran and played their games, 
while you stood by the river in our spot. 
I sat and watched with distant visions in my mind 
of times we spent together feeding seagulls, 
as they flapped and hovered in the wind; 
you were concerned I'd lose a finger to a beak. 
The gulls were very greedy birds that day. 

I looked and saw you turn. I stood to wave but caught 
my breath; he was not you. Of course, he was not you. 
How quickly lives can change and leave mere memories
that rattle in the mind. The echoes of our lovers and
our friends who will remain forever in our souls; 
their epitaphs to note they've passed along this way. 
I thought I saw you in the park today, but you were 
only there within the lonely chambers of my mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/23/2009 3:14:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Anita and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:21:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:01:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/9/2009 6:05:00 PM
Thanks to all for your kind comments. Sky
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Date: 12/9/2009 12:04:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/9/2009 3:05:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
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Date: 12/8/2009 4:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Anita. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2009 1:03:00 PM
Hi Anita, enjoyed your feature poem this week, congrats! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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Date: 12/6/2009 11:45:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
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Date: 6/12/2009 3:15:00 PM
Great write Anita & welcome to the Soup>James
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Date: 6/11/2009 11:06:00 AM
Thrilling.
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Date: 6/11/2009 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Jeremiah, Carol, and John for your kind words.
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Date: 6/11/2009 9:28:00 AM
Memorylane! This is a beautiful piece! Welcome to the soup! - jeremia
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Date: 6/11/2009 8:20:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Anita. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/10/2009 10:09:00 PM
I love these walks down memories trails dear Anita~Although they can sometimes be bitter~They remind us of the sweetness', that once strode upon lifes paths....And I loved the way that You were able to paint this picture, before Your eyes, and inside of Your heart!! Excellent write!! Keep it up~"Love & Warmth To You & Your Loves, John!!:):) Goodnight ~
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