The Park -- Part Two

(Please read The Park -- Part One first ...
This is a continuation from Part One, due to space limitations)

Yes, kids at play are bold and wise
with flashing smiles and knowing eyes.
Children tire easily of grown-up prattle;
thoughts turn to cakes, to toys that rattle.
They think that Belles and Bills tell lies.
Tme is a birthday gift or a new surprise:
games to play; a windy day for a kite one flies;
coins that shine; toys that squeak;
a trip to the zoo at the end of the week.
Belles and Bills persist in their story.
Some even mention forgotten glory.
Children go home to eat, to sleep,
as Belles and Bills their vigils keep
then wearily drift back to flats
to listen to the rustling rats,
to sip their beers or gins or rums --
to wait until the morning comes.
They stand and stretch, look all around,
surveying the world to which they're bound.
Then they shuffle away with airs of sadness
at being always on the verge of madness.
They'll see once more the sun's first ray,
the birth in the park of another day.
Eyes are glazed and minds are dazed;
the atmosphere grows dim and hazed.
An eerie echo of an unheard bark
reverberates throughout the park
amid falling leaves and a darkening sky
and the nightly proof of the chilren's lie.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/17/2012 5:01:00 PM
This was quite a poetic gem.
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Date: 1/26/2012 3:44:00 PM
OMG! What a profound master poet you are! My paltry words of praise can’t touch this nor the inner voice that leaves one spell bound after absorbing both parts. Bravo! Bravo! This poem is going into my favorites and you are indeed a favorite new poet of mine.
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Date: 6/9/2011 1:33:00 PM
Interesting work that you have penned..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon...Sara
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Leo Larry Amadore
Date: 6/10/2011 7:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara...I hope that you read the first part of this poem, which was posted separately because of space limitations on this site...I would appreciate knowing whether your comment applies to the entire poem, or just to the second part (the part to which your comment is attached.) Thanks again for reading my work, and I will certainly look for and comment on more of yours.
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