The Pardon Appeal

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Written: December 24, 2023, For Joseph May Contest _______________________________________ Mute whispers Wonder wings On teal night. Twilight silence Pardon pray soar Dreams float at dusk Path through cosmos. Majestic hues spark Endless heart peace urged Swish wish to blithe star Dive in swinging thoughts Lights serenade calm.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/24/2023 3:28:00 PM

such a magnificent creation, dear Sotto. I like the theme of your poem as well as your imagery. Your creative capacity is inspiring. You created a beautiful poem despite the syllable constraints in the contest. Best wishes with the contest. Have a joyous holiday, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Silent One

Date: 12/24/2023 11:57:00 AM

You did this so well for this contest, despite the syllable constraints you have create a poem full of imagery and in a theme, I believe Joseph will like very much... Good luck in the contest..