The Pan of Plums

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As the old broom glides across the floor Sweeping up remnants of lunch's crumbs Someone rings the bell at the den door I leave dog hair, spilled food and come My love greets me with a pan of plums

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/29/2017 4:58:00 PM

Ummm. are you making some plum pudding? A tasty quintain.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/27/2017 11:41:00 AM

lovely English Quintain, my friend

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/27/2017 3:32:00 PM

Jack, Thanks for the visit and the kind review..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2017 5:36:00 PM

This is really really nice, Sara. I love it! Just a slice of time so nicely rhymed. Where is this story you told me about?

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/27/2017 3:33:00 PM

Andrea, A slice of time waiting to eat the plum..Thanks for dropping by..Your visit is greatly appreciated..Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/26/2017 8:23:00 AM

Wow, that's so nice, great example, Sara:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/26/2017 9:05:00 AM

Jo, Thanks for the kind review..I hope that you enter the contest..I have had some great ones so far..Enjoyed reading each one of them..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/25/2017 10:17:00 PM

Beautifully crafted write my friend! I'm always impressed with your poetry, and it's getting quite masterful now days! I loved reading this wondrous poem this evening! Thank you for sharing this illustrious piece! Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/26/2017 5:18:00 AM

Russell, Thanks for dropping by..Good to see an updated picture..I have a contest going that you might want to enter. This poem is an example of what I would like in the contest..I know you can do one..Sara