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The Pampered Kid

I did not just wake up
the marvelous blended 
voices of beautiful birds 
woke me
before i attempted 
getting off my bed
breakfast in bed
just perfect
from toast to juice
could not wish for 
anything more

it was sunny and beautiful
just how i wanted
as usual i felt healthy 
and strong for every 
activity i had planned
its isnt my fault am a 
pampered kid
the day ends
i say a prayer and wish 
for a brighter day 
tomorrow 
i know i will get whatever 
i want
am a rich king's kid 
and i cant be blamed
am the daughter of the 
king of kings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/24/2009 12:32:00 PM
Very special poem, In respones about your comment about grandparents, I think God give the special time of grandparenting, for two reasons, One, it takes the experiance of a grandparents life to understand the importance of showing a child love. And some children aren't showned love by their parents, in the home, The grandparent's makes up for that, having lived and learned.
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Date: 6/5/2009 9:38:00 AM
I Agree With Sajdah. With Everything. And The Part About The Birds Really Is Cute. Jese.
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Date: 6/4/2009 4:58:00 AM
Hm.. but if yew put all that money on use you (like helping the kids who cant offered pampers)woudn't be so judge like you think you are.but again thats not really directed at you.I love the way you said "the birds signing "woke you up.Pretty
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