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The Painted Sunset

coming home
day is done
my cold bones
creak with sorrow
the only thing that keeps me together
Sunrise

red gold pinks yellows
a tinge of purple here
a tinge of blue there
Sunrise

Helen Peever

Copyright © Helen The Poet | Year Posted 2011

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Sara Kendrick Date: 5/29/2011 5:07:00 PM Enjoyed reading this one..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 5/26/2011 6:42:00 PM Helen, a pleasure to see your poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/26/2011 12:42:00 PM Many congrats :) Login to Reply

Dr Hitendra Mehta Date: 5/26/2011 3:41:00 AM Many congrats Helen on big win in HG's contest with this excellent entry. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/25/2011 6:29:00 PM Congrats Helen on your wonderful win in this contest by HG .. an excellent entry luv. enjoy.. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 5/25/2011 5:08:00 PM The beautiful colors ot the sunrise and sunset should awaken the lowest spirits. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/25/2011 3:25:00 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG, Helen Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/25/2011 10:50:00 AM Congratulations on your win in HG's contest Helen. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 4/29/2011 3:45:00 PM Dear Helen , I ran out of room, Sorry I know YOU are New Here If YOU want to Win Contest You should read the Rules In a Day or Two I will check back If YOU haven't adhered to the Rules You Will be Disqualified, Again Welcome to the SOUP With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG Login to Reply

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 4/29/2011 3:37:00 PM Dear Helen, Welcome To the Family of POETRYSOUP, I Thank-YOU for Supporting my Contest : " Sunrise - Verses - Sunset " A suggestion; on the left hand side of your Members Page under Contest You will see the Members Contest click on that and find the Contest YOU want to Enter and There Will be Contest Rules My Contest says I will not except " I do not Know " as a Form and YOU must put YOUR name on the Bottom of YOUR POEM, at the top of YOUR POETRYSOUP Member page has the forms make changes Login to Reply