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The Painted Sunset

coming home day is done my cold bones creak with sorrow the only thing that keeps me together Sunrise red gold pinks yellows a tinge of purple here a tinge of blue there Sunrise Helen Peever

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/29/2011 5:07:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..Congrats..Sara

John Freeman

Date: 5/26/2011 6:42:00 PM

Helen, a pleasure to see your poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 5/26/2011 12:42:00 PM

Many congrats :)

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 5/26/2011 3:41:00 AM

Many congrats Helen on big win in HG's contest with this excellent entry. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/25/2011 6:29:00 PM

Congrats Helen on your wonderful win in this contest by HG .. an excellent entry luv. enjoy..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/25/2011 5:08:00 PM

The beautiful colors ot the sunrise and sunset should awaken the lowest spirits. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/25/2011 3:25:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG, Helen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/25/2011 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in HG's contest Helen. Love, Carol

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/29/2011 3:45:00 PM

Dear Helen , I ran out of room, Sorry I know YOU are New Here If YOU want to Win Contest You should read the Rules In a Day or Two I will check back If YOU haven't adhered to the Rules You Will be Disqualified, Again Welcome to the SOUP With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/29/2011 3:37:00 PM

Dear Helen, Welcome To the Family of POETRYSOUP, I Thank-YOU for Supporting my Contest : " Sunrise - Verses - Sunset " A suggestion; on the left hand side of your Members Page under Contest You will see the Members Contest click on that and find the Contest YOU want to Enter and There Will be Contest Rules My Contest says I will not except " I do not Know " as a Form and YOU must put YOUR name on the Bottom of YOUR POEM, at the top of YOUR POETRYSOUP Member page has the forms make changes