Notes About The Poem

Painting: 'Beating The Showers Home' Artist: Charlotte Joan Steinberg

The Painted Picture

I sit upon the well-worn vinyl couch
and apprehensively await my turn
to see the doctor.  Others, deep in thought, 
glance up a moment, then resume their worlds.

I scan the room, a mixture of decor-
odd tables, lamps. But now my eyes are fixed
upon the papered wall, a strange design
of rambling shapes. Amid this chaos hangs
a painting filled with imagery of life.

I fall into this peaceful, quiet scene
as graceful birds with arched wings fly above.
Neath blue-gray skies, there winding down a hill,
a brook meanders to the lovely lake,
as nestled buildings on the velvet grass
are hugged by two dirt roads. And there, my love 
with horse and wagon, riding to the house-
our home, surrounded by the blossomed trees.
Content within, I happily await-

inside this painting, work of art, of life-
secured within a well-framed boundary,
suspended on a nail upon a wall;
a sense-filled concept, so confined, compact,
divided from the abstractness beyond
its stable, gilded frame of burnished gold.

I hear my name now called, and it's my turn
to see the doctor- and my mind now leaps
outside the gilded frame- into a world
unlike the painted picture on the wall.


May 6, 2016

Premiere Contest: Imagist Any Form
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Bankson Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 5:25 AM
Never to late....Congrats on a well deserved piece...Thank you for sharing it...Jai
Inman Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 1:39 PM
Wonderful writing and very creative perspective Sandra.
Haight Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:18 PM
Thank you very much, James. Sandra
A   Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 2:26 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your wonderful win. LINDA
Haight Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:18 PM
Thank you very much, Linda. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 10:44 PM
Great write and win Sandra...Congrats
Haight Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph. Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 6:47 PM
wow, you did this SO WELL. I am very impressed. It may be the best one yet I have seen. FAVE
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. I am honored by your supportive comment and FAVE! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Godwin Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Beautifully written - a joy! CayCay
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Hi CayCay, thank you so much for stopping by with your nice comment. Hugs, Sandra
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace