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The Paint Brush

Profound paintings on the world’s canvas Produced by the stroke of divine paint brush Tough, tender, slender and beauty luminous Melt, mould discerning hearts or crush Smiling, laughing faces with bubbling zest Faces in agony and pain with rivulets of tears Ugly, lustful faces, scheming and plotting to wrest Faces sunk in gloom, torments, anguish and fears Days sparkling with sun light of hope and aspiration Moonlit nights wrapped in the ecstasy of romance Demonized nights horrifying beyond imagination Ducks in flight and peacocks whirling in dervish’s dance Colorful chirping birds and singing nightingale Roses, gardens, trees, butterflies and bees Races black, white, yellow, brown strong and frail All artistically crafted whichever way one sees Refreshing serenity of the religious places of worship And its contrast in hatred and abomination of war Cool comfort and compassion of love and friendship Bringing souls together from the near and far How has the brush painted me in awe-inspiring scene? Does the glow on my face transcend the virtues of my soul? Am I embodiment of love and kindness or ugly obscene? On canvas am I Colossus or dwarfed by selfish goal?

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Date: 10/15/2013 7:29:00 PM
This is a creative and powerful write. The imagination and imagery pulls the reader in and helps them "paint" a journey into your world of artistry. nice job
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/16/2013 2:08:00 PM
Thanks Robin for your words of appreciation. It is said and how true it is that the beauty lies in the eye of the beholder. To admire a beauty one needs discerning eyes which God has gifted you. Thanks and God bless you.
Date: 7/21/2012 6:45:00 PM
wow this was wonderful Mohammad,artistically crafted,great write bro
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 7/25/2012 6:44:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciation Richard. You are very kind
Date: 2/14/2010 11:02:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem. Excellent wording and rhyme. Have a wonderful day. Ellen
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Date: 2/14/2010 7:07:00 AM
Loved it, thanks
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Date: 4/13/2009 10:52:00 AM
Ur incredible can I have ur autograph? - darkpoet
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Date: 12/4/2008 8:01:00 AM
Dear Mohammad - Congratulations on your 2 poems making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/29/2008 9:29:00 PM
Mohammad - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/26/2008 7:52:00 PM
your writing is exquisite as usual... what a beautiful talent you have my brother! You deserve all the awards! Salam from Nassira
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Date: 11/19/2008 5:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Mohammad. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/3/2008 8:24:00 AM
A masterpiece dear, Mohammad. All the best in the final round. Lainie
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Date: 10/27/2008 4:01:00 PM
I really liked this poem the first time I read it. Congratulations on having two poems selected as semi-finalists. Way to go! Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 10/27/2008 12:05:00 PM
Powerful imagery formed with the gentle strokes of your quill and ink.Love this poem of yours.You just painted a wonderful painting upon the canvas of my mind.I am a painter myself too, so, I can relate to this poem.You just brought back to my head some of the works of the great masters from the past and present.God bless you! Rgds.Dorian
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Date: 10/27/2008 6:10:00 AM
Warmest congrats dear friend on making it through the first round! Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/10/2008 5:08:00 AM
Though I was a little late in reading your invite, glad that I made it here, really worth it... great piece :) Teri
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Date: 10/6/2008 4:14:00 PM
Thank you Mohammad for inviting me to read this exeptional poem. If we use our words to paint love and understanding then the power of love will defeat the love of power. As a poet, I hope my pictures bring hope and joy. It is difficult to do when its political. Then I wish my words evoke thought and incentive to get involved. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 9/24/2008 5:46:00 PM
The vivid imagery forwards your thoughts in a powerful way. Despite challenges, people do have opportunities to paint a way for positive change. This poem has interesting contrasts for the reader to ponder. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Keep up the good writing! Karen
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Date: 9/14/2008 10:57:00 AM
a walk through the museum and a visit to the masters of stroke. who without use of camera portrayed the human soul on canvas. very good tribute to them John H Loving III
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Date: 8/12/2008 9:28:00 AM
Great art is great art. Nice work and thank you for your comments!
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Date: 8/10/2008 3:50:00 AM
Only you can answer that, my dear - but if your truth in words be the judge, I'd say you are Colossus. :) Lovely poetry, love Kristin
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