The Paint Brush

Profound paintings on the world’s canvas
Produced by the stroke of divine paint brush
Tough, tender, slender and beauty luminous
Melt, mould discerning hearts or crush

Smiling, laughing faces with bubbling zest 
Faces in agony and pain with rivulets of tears
Ugly, lustful faces, scheming and plotting to wrest
Faces sunk in gloom, torments, anguish and fears

Days sparkling with sun light of hope and aspiration
Moonlit nights wrapped in the ecstasy of romance
Demonized nights horrifying beyond imagination
Ducks in flight and peacocks whirling in dervish’s dance

Colorful chirping birds and singing nightingale
Roses, gardens, trees, butterflies and bees
Races black, white, yellow, brown strong and frail
All artistically crafted whichever way one sees

Refreshing serenity of the religious places of worship
And its contrast in hatred and abomination of war
Cool comfort and compassion of love and friendship
Bringing souls together from the near and far

How has the brush painted me in awe-inspiring scene?
Does the glow on my face transcend the virtues of my soul?
Am I embodiment of love and kindness or ugly obscene?
On canvas am I Colossus or dwarfed by selfish goal?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Davis Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 7:29 PM
This is a creative and powerful write. The imagination and imagery pulls the reader in and helps them "paint" a journey into your world of artistry. nice job
Yamin Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 2:08 PM
Thanks Robin for your words of appreciation. It is said and how true it is that the beauty lies in the eye of the beholder. To admire a beauty one needs discerning eyes which God has gifted you. Thanks and God bless you.
Palmer Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 6:45 PM
wow this was wonderful Mohammad,artistically crafted,great write bro
Yamin Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 6:44 PM
Thanks for your appreciation Richard. You are very kind
Smith Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 11:02 AM
Enjoyed your poem. Excellent wording and rhyme. Have a wonderful day. Ellen
Palli Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 7:07 AM
Loved it, thanks
Orozco Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 10:52 AM
Ur incredible can I have ur autograph? - darkpoet
Heck Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 8:01 AM
Dear Mohammad - Congratulations on your 2 poems making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
Jordan Avatar
November 29, 2008 at 9:29 PM
Mohammad - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
Merahi Avatar
November 26, 2008 at 7:52 PM
your writing is exquisite as usual... what a beautiful talent you have my brother! You deserve all the awards! Salam from Nassira
Brown Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 5:18 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Mohammad. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 8:24 AM
A masterpiece dear, Mohammad. All the best in the final round. Lainie
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October 27, 2008 at 4:01 PM
I really liked this poem the first time I read it. Congratulations on having two poems selected as semi-finalists. Way to go! Best wishes in the finals. Karen
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 27, 2008 at 12:05 PM
Powerful imagery formed with the gentle strokes of your quill and ink.Love this poem of yours.You just painted a wonderful painting upon the canvas of my mind.I am a painter myself too, so, I can relate to this poem.You just brought back to my head some of the works of the great masters from the past and present.God bless you! Rgds.Dorian
Winter Avatar
October 27, 2008 at 6:10 AM
Warmest congrats dear friend on making it through the first round! Good luck! Love, Shar
Cailo Avatar
October 10, 2008 at 5:08 AM
Though I was a little late in reading your invite, glad that I made it here, really worth it... great piece :) Teri
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 6, 2008 at 4:14 PM
Thank you Mohammad for inviting me to read this exeptional poem. If we use our words to paint love and understanding then the power of love will defeat the love of power. As a poet, I hope my pictures bring hope and joy. It is difficult to do when its political. Then I wish my words evoke thought and incentive to get involved. God Bless. Vince
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September 24, 2008 at 5:46 PM
The vivid imagery forwards your thoughts in a powerful way. Despite challenges, people do have opportunities to paint a way for positive change. This poem has interesting contrasts for the reader to ponder. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Keep up the good writing! Karen
Loving Iii Avatar
September 14, 2008 at 10:57 AM
a walk through the museum and a visit to the masters of stroke. who without use of camera portrayed the human soul on canvas. very good tribute to them John H Loving III
Anish Avatar
August 12, 2008 at 9:28 AM
Great art is great art. Nice work and thank you for your comments!
Reynolds Avatar
August 10, 2008 at 3:50 AM
Only you can answer that, my dear - but if your truth in words be the judge, I'd say you are Colossus. :) Lovely poetry, love Kristin
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