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The Pain of Desire Il Dolore Del Desiderio Rhyming Version

The waning moon is like a shadow on my heart Consumed by darkness ever since we’ve been apart My soul is weak My flesh it speaks Desire flaming Ever since we’ve been apart So I am longing, for our tender moons return Reunited, two hearts will burn Without her, there is barren hunger, nothing more An empty wasteland, with no moonlight as before She turns away My soul decays What use is longing When her moon can’t hear my song

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/9/2011 3:26:00 AM
I love your poem: it's passionate, tender, melancholic and full of desire. I hope you will get her back, David. I feel the profound sadness in your lines. Don't give up...until you see, " Our tender moons return united, two hearts will burn. " Thanks for sharing your amazing poem. I wish you success in your writing endeavors. Have a wonderful Sunday. Peace and Love, Andrew.
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