The Pain Inside

where do i take this pain of mine? 
you were suppose to be there for me no matter what! 
you made a promise that you would never leave me side. 
each time you said you cared for me my heart was joyous 
thinking we would unite as one and be happy for ever 
you told me i was the greatest and sweetest guy you had ever met 
we were made for each other,even you said that your self 
i was counting the days that we were gonna go out 
waiting for that special moment when i was going to ask you out 
then you decided to take another path which i didn't understand 
i showed you the light of happiness and eternal joy, 
yet under temptation you went to the other side knowing that your going to get 
hurt 
maybe it was better if i just lied and didn't tell you the truth 
since most of the time girls want that 
not only did you break my heart you showed me that you never cared 
the love i gave you was pure and real 
yet you didn't seem to care what you did
how can one live with the fact knowing that our love is real? 
you wanted to take a chance with me?you said i deserved a chance to be with 
you 
that was a lie since all you could think about was the other guy 
not only that but i thought of you as someone who was unlike any other girl 
to me your just another girl who takes nice guys for granted 
you took my heart tied it and hang it to die.............. 
nothing else matters now since i have lost once again 
throughout the whole time we talked i thought we were best friends 
no i was just a rebound 
my heart is in pieces thanks to you 
i hope you find joy in what you did and remember what you have lost 
trust i saw an angel in you,but now i had a different your everything thats bad 
you have no idea how many tears i will cry just because of you 
all of this was just a lie......... 
now i know that i cant take my pain to you i will take it and deal with it by my self 
once again 
with no one to help me not even one i considered to be the greatest friend i have 
ever had
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006


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